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 PostPosted: Sun Mar 19, 2006 3:33 am Reply with quote  
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  Shatterpoint
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Darth Lanik wrote:
oh and btw youll nee me to be the bad guy on your mission so........ ya


I dunno about that, I already have another sith in mind, lol. Wink



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but....but im always the maga bad guy boss
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"With Lanik dead this could stop.  The troops will be easier to kill."

Abba looked at Lanik.

"someone kill him, before I do."


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Darth Lanik wrote:
but....but im always the maga bad guy boss


He has a point there Razz
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 PostPosted: Sun Mar 19, 2006 4:11 am Reply with quote  
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Lol, well, maybe he'll be in it, I dunno though,I already think I know which sith I'm using.
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Man, Lisa, and you told me on AIM that it wasn't that good! Are you crazy?!? I love it!
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Tēnei te tangata pūhuruhuru,
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Upane...Upane.
Upane kaupane. Whiti te rā!
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Keep going!!! Very Happy We want more! We want more!
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*falls out of seat and continues to read, too into the story to get into seat again.*

Good work.
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*Falls off cliff* Ow..that hurt..but the awesomeness of this story is taking the pain away, lol. And Brian I agree with you 100%. You kept telling me it was terrible on AIM, I don't know where you get that from Lisa, lol. Very Happy This is very good. The suspense is choking me. MORE! MORE! MORE!
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Whoa Whoa, hold on. You aren't the one doing the choking this time, Saber? This is a historical moment we have here.
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*Takes picture* Wow! That is amazing!
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Hey! Who said I wasn't choking myself? Razz
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because...um...cause you wern't. Vader was choking you Razz
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You said the suspense is choking you. Suspense isn't you because its just a literary device.

Speaking of which.

"What do you think I'm paying you for?"

"Your not paying us at all, were just a clever metaphor used to personify the abstract concept of thought"

"One more crack like that and I'll see you fired"

"No, I have 3 kids!!"

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( EDIT: I finished that chapter so heres the rest of it.)

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Asil had the next day off from her classes, to recover from the injuries she sustained during the duel. She rose early, out of habit. Hmm, what shall I do, she thought. I have all day to do whatever I want. She smiled. She hadn’t had a day off to do anything she wanted for a long time. She was always very busy with training and classes. Hmm, I may as well take this opportunity to sleep in, she thought, lying back down.

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Mace Windu and Yoda were having a private meeting in Yoda’s quarters. They were very displeased about Akiva’s actions during the duel the previous day.

“I felt the darkside emitting from her strongly Master.” Said Mace gravely.

“Yes, yes.” Responded Yoda. “Felt it I did. Know I do not what her problem is.”

“She seems to have serious anger issues. I believe she should be put on probation, for the time being. Her aggressiveness during the duel yesterday was astonishing.”

“Agree I do.” Said Yoda.

“ Perhaps then, for the time being Akiva should be put on probation so we can watch her more closely. If she does not improve in the next three months we can dismiss her from the Temple.” Said Mace, with a frown.

“Yes.” Yoda nodded. “The right course of action I believe that is.”

He sighed.

“Have a feeling I do, that the trouble is just beginning.” Yoda said, with a worried look upon his wrinkled face.

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Akiva stood outside the Jedi Council Chamber, waiting. They had summoned her but she did not yet know why. What do they want now? She thought, annoyed. This is a waste of my time, I have much better things to do. Suddenly the door opened. She walked in slowly, taking her time getting to the center of the room. To her surprised only Yoda and Mace Windu were present. She looked them over carefully. They did not look happy. She looked into Mace’s eyes, trying to read what they said. As usual, his hard gaze did not reveal anything.

“You requested my presence Master’s?” She said respectfully.

“Yes.” Answered Mace curtly. “ We have requested your presence here today because of your conduct during your last duel with Asil Leikane.”

Uh oh, Akiva thought. Apparently they pay more attention than I realized.


“What was wrong with my conduct during the duel?” she asked.

“Very aggressive you were.” Said Yoda calmly. “The darkside we felt from you.”

Oh man, now I’m really I trouble. The old guys finally realized what I have done.

“What?” She said, trying to appear innocent. “I have done no such thing. Perhaps I was a little angry but I did not use my anger. You must have felt wrong.”

“I don’t think so.” Said Mace, raising a eyebrow. “You do realize lying to us will do you no good. We can read your thoughts. We have sensed much anger in you for quite awhile but we have not seen a padawan act so aggressively in a duel for quite some time. It troubles us.”

“Master’s, I was simply trying to win. Nothing more. I have nothing against Asil, absolutely nothing. All I merely trying to win the duel so that I could have the assignment. What is so wrong about that?”

“Nothing if it was the truth.” Retorted Mace. “Akiva Blackmoor you are on probation until further notice.”

“No, I can’t be on probation!” she said. “I didn’t do anything!”

“You are dismissed.” Mace said sharply, glancing at the door.

Akiva bowed and then stomped out the room angrily.


Mace sighed. “What are we going to do with that child Master?”

“Not sure am I. Meditate on this I will.” Yoda responded quietly.

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