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Chapter 2
 PostPosted: Sat Mar 18, 2006 11:28 pm Reply with quote  
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( Alright, heres the second chapter. Enjoy. Smile )

Early the next morning Asil knocked on Yoda’s door. “Master Yoda?” she whispered. “Are you awake?”

“Yes, yes, young one. In you may come.” Responded the Jedi master kindly. The door opened seemingly by itself.

As she entered the room she looked around. It’s rather plain, she thought. I suppose a great Jedi master like Yoda wouldn’t really care about decoration though.

“You requested my presence Master.” Asil prompted respectfully, turning towards Yoda.

“Yes. A contest the Council has for you and Akiva Blackmoor. A lightsaber duel it shall be.” Responded Yoda softly.

“A lightsaber duel?” Asil asked excitedly. “What is the contest for?” she asked.

“A assignment we have and decide who to give it to, we could not. Best it was we decided for you or young Akiva to earn this assignment. Already informed Akiva of this we have. The duel will take place this afternoon, contact you I will when it is time.”

“Thank you Master.” Said Asil happily. She bowed respectfully and left the room.

“Hmmm, interesting this should be.” Said Yoda, amused.

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After all her classes were over for the day, Asil went back to her room to rest for awhile. I better keep my comlink on, just in case Yoda contacts me for the duel while I’m sleeping, she thought. She laid down on her sleep-couch, wondering just how the duel would end.

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Asil Leikane looked around. She was standing in a plain white room, surrounded by fellow students and Jedi masters. She looked straight in front of her and saw Akiva Blackmoor coming straight at her, running at full speed with her crimson lightsaber ignited with a enraged look on her face. Her dark green eyes appeared to have flames in them, her anger was so great . Asil stumbled and quickly fumbled for her lightsaber, using the Force to pull it into her hand. She quickly activated it and blocked the incoming attack from Akiva.

“ I will beat you.” Akiva growled. “ I don’t care if I have to use my anger to do it, I’m going to prove I’m better than you once and for all.”

Akiva Force-pushed Asil back with extraordinary strength for someone so young. Asil fell heavily, knocking the wind out of herself. She quickly tried to check her breath and rolled out of the way quickly as Akiva gave a downward slash towards her neck. She used the Force to jump up and over Akiva’s head, kicking her in the back as she went over her. Akiva began to fall but turned it into a flip.

“You won’t take me down that easily.” She said, looking at Asil with immense hatred. Asil was shocked, she had no idea why Akiva was so angry.

What did I do, she wondered. How did I make her so impossibly angry? She didn’t have anymore time to wonder, she was too busy protecting her self from Akiva’s blade, desperately trying to parry all the blows she was sending at her. She had never seen Akiva fight so aggressively. She was surprised to find she was actually frightened.

No, she thought. I must let go of my fear. The Force will protect me and after all, this is only a training duel ,it isn’t for real. The assignment can’t be all that important.

She let go of all her fear and even the little anger she had and let the Force flow through her. All of the sudden she was moving even faster than before and fighting better than ever. She was amazed. So this is how it feels when the Force is flowing through you, controlling your actions, she thought.

But it wasn’t enough. Akiva saw Asil’s improvement and got even angrier. She finally gave in completely to her anger. She thrusted and parried with her lightsaber with so much force she knocked the lightsaber from Asil’s hands. She Force-pushed her over once again. Asil was laying on the floor in shock.

No, this can’t be happening. I felt the Force, it was flowing through me, she couldn’t have beaten me like that, she just couldn’t have, she thought desperately.

Akiva raised her lightsaber over her head and prepared for the final blow.

No, Asil thought. This isn’t happening. It can’t be happening.

The crimson blade began its descent towards Asil's neck.

No, she thought weakly.


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Asil woke up, sweating. “ It was just a dream.” She said in relief. “Just a dream nothing more.”

She looked at her chrono and it was still early yet. Okay, I am definitely not going back to sleep. That dream was horrible. I’ll just lay here and rest awhile longer. she thought.

She laid her head back down on her pillow and stared at the ceiling. She laid there for a long time, resting and waiting for Yoda to contact her and tell her it was time for the duel.

After a few hours her comlink buzzed.

“Time for the duel it is. “ Yoda said calmly.

“Alright, I’ll be right there Master.” Asil responded.

She cut the communication and stood up. She changed into a fresh tunic and grabbed her lightsaber. As she head out the door she looked back into her room. I sure hope that dream won’t come true, she thought. Or else that duel will be a nightmare.

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*is on the the edge of his seat* Now please, make me fall out of it. Very Happy
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*on the edge of cliff* Well...I could fall off, I guess, but it would hurt..but still...well, what I'm trying to say here is: MORE! MORE! MORE!
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its sweet. keep on going.


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Lol, glad people like it, I might try to write more tonight.
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Yay you have started fanfiction Very Happy . Keep up the good work Cool
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This is great, Lisa. Keep it going.
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(Heres the third chapter which I literally just finished,lol.Laughing )

Akiva was more than ready for the duel. She could not wait to beat Asil and prove herself again. Instead of waiting for a Council member to contact her for the duel she stayed in the training room where the duel was to take place for several hours. When she heard that Asil was on her way to the training room for the duel she tried to warm up a bit, get her blood flowing. I’ll beat that scrawny brat if it’s the last thing I do, she thought. At last she saw Asil arrive. Asil warmed up a little bit, then took her place on one side of the mat, as Akiva took her position on the opposite side. They bowed to each other, more out of formality than out of true respect. Mace Windu was the referee for the match.

“Three rounds. Each round will continue until one of you is struck with what would be considered a death blow or until one of you surrenders.” He barked out.

He raised a hand, which was holding a flag and dropped it, the signal to begin.

Akiva activated her lightsaber as soon as Mace dropped the flag and charged Asil. Asil barely had time to activate her lightsaber before Akiva was upon her. She was startled as she saw the anger in Akiva’s eyes, just like in the dream. She quickly jumped into the air as Akiva was swinging at her and just barely made it over her lightsaber. Let’s try to end this round quickly, she thought in mid- air, twisting and touching Akiva ever so lightly on the neck with her saber. The crowd cheered for Asil, as a good deal of them were rooting for her to win.

“Round one, Leikane.” Said Mace over the deafening roar of the crowd.

“Round two……… begin.” He said as he dropped the flag once again.

This time Asil decided to surprise Akiva by taking the offensive. She rushed the girl, her blade moving so quickly that it was a blur. Akiva backed up in shock, surprised she was having such difficulty in holding Asil off. Odd, she hardly ever takes the offensive, she thought, getting even angrier. Yes, yes, my anger, of course. All I have to do is use it, that will let me beat her, I’m sure of it. Akiva quickly let her anger take over, feeling the power of the darkside. And the worst thing is she enjoyed it. She enjoyed feeling the rush of dark power. Asil was puzzled, as she saw Akiva’s anger take control and saw how she enjoyed it. Akiva took the offensive, pushing Asil back. Asil barely managed to get her saber in between her and Akiva’s blade in time, barely managing to prolong the round. She tried to surprise Akiva again by making her blade go in unpredictable directions, then she stabbed down with her blade and caught Akiva in the leg, giving her a bad burn. Akiva cried out in pain and rage and kicked Asil hard in the stomach, knocking the wind out of her and sending her to the floor. The crowd gasped, surprised at the aggressiveness of the girl. She quickly touched Asil on the neck with her saber, before the poor girl could recover. Yes!, she thought. All I have to do is win the next round and she’s beaten.

“Round two, Blackmoor.” Mace announced as the crowd booed. They were surprised how dirty Akiva was fighting, it was very un-Jedi like and it displeased them.

Asil struggled to her feet, still sore from the kick that Akiva had delivered, as well as the crash to the floor.

As soon as Asil was on her feet and appeared steady Mace spoke again.

“Final round. Begin. “

Asil calmed her mind and tried to let the Force in, to let it flow through her like it did in the dream. As the Force began flowing through her she felt so calm, so perfect. Time seemed to slow down and it didn’t seem difficult at all to dodge Akiva as she ran at her full speed. She was surprised how easy it all seemed. I’ve never felt the Force like this before, she thought excitedly as she parried Akiva’s strikes easily. Even if I don’t win and get the assignment, just feeling the Force like this is worth it. She and Akiva’s blades were really moving now, they were going extremely fast. Akiva struck out and kicked Asil yet again, this time in the lip. Asil used the momentum from the kick to do a backflip and wiped the blood from her lip as she landed. She quickly Force-pushed Akiva back, just to get a chance to catch her breath.

“Ready to give up yet?” Akiva taunted.

“Not a chance.” Asil answered calmly, even with a slight smile on her face.

Once again, their sabers began to clash, Asil going on the defensive again. I’ll let Akiva take control or at least let her think she’s in control anyway, she thought.I’ll just bide my time until I see a opening. Akiva appeared to get cockier as she thought she had control once again. I’ve got her, Akiva thought happily. She’s tiring, it won’t be long now until I have her beaten.


NOW!, Asil thought.

Suddenly Asil dove between Akiva’s legs, rolling on the floor until she was a few feet away from her and suddenly jumped up and tapped Akiva on the neck with her lightsaber before Akiva even realized what was happening.

Yes, Asil thought. I did it!


“Round three, Leikane. The overall victor is Asil Leikane.” Mace announced as the crowd cheered. Akiva just stood there, shocked and angry that she had actually lost.

Master Yoda smiled from where he was standing. “Right you were.” He said, turning to Mace.

“The correct choice, Asil was.”

“Thank you Master but we shall see about that when she attempts to complete the assignment.” Mace replied.

“Have a feeling I do, that succeed she will.” Said Yoda, still smiling.

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cool. I wonder what Akiva is going to do.


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this is really good...but it would be better if I was in it Razz

J/K it is fine how it is.
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your character look up to Mace, she should go over and ask him something.


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very good i like it
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Jedi Abba wrote:
this is really good...but it would be better if I was in it Razz

J/K it is fine how it is.



Lol, I was actually thinking about putting you in it somewhere, lol. Laughing

Sam, my character actually might end up doing something with Mace possibly in the next chapter maybe. Thanks for the kind comments everyone. Very Happy
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it is awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


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oh and btw youll nee me to be the bad guy on your mission so........ ya



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