|
|
|
Wow, you're buttering 'em up really nicely Cimil. However, I don't feel a this site needs a demi-god. Do you? 
Cimil wrote these words ((double parenthesis signifies my added comments. Although I disagree with some of your writing, understand these are mostly jokes. I don't mean any offense when I say this so don't come and mob me.)):
| Quote: |
Wrist Rocket Launcher ((a rist rocket launcher. Wow! I bet Dad would be proud when I go and blow up an enemy tank in Iraq with my WRIST!));
Mandalorian Assault Frigate ((Hot ride! I wish I had enough bucks to buy a fully armed, personal CAPITAL SHIP! What bounty hunter has a capital ship?))
last surviving Mandalorians ((Hmm.... maybe I could make Mortalis become one of the last surviving Sith.... However much I disagree with this I think it's alright to let this slide.))
He was one of the greatest warriors in the galaxy, feared by all. ((Henceforth, you shall be known as supreme demi-god of Star Wars Rebels and will rule the galaxy as leader of the most powerful bounty hunter group in the galaxy which includes.... you and um.... you.... I forgot that other guy um.... oh yeah.... YOU! Maybe this could be overlooked if you give him a small entorage to play around with. A body guard perhaps?))
Now he is one of the best Bounty hunters in the galaxy. (("Now". Hmm.... Darth Mortalis is now one of the best Sith in the galacy. Doesn't sound right does it? Especially considering my own cruddy RPing around here. And why is he better than other bounty hunters? He's not a very detailed man. Kinda' a superman full of complete mystery.... a superman who drinks and kills people.... yeah....  Wait a second.... Superman's never in a cantina and he never kills anybody.... what are you tryin' to pull here?  )) |
Don't get me wrong. I'm fine.... happy that you have a powerful character. It's better than a whimp  but I'm not suporting making a star. You should be exciting and give off an interesting light like a star but don't be too powerful.... too um.... radiant.... Be like a lightbulb in a galaxy full of lightbulbs:  (  I know. Just another lame way to fit in another emoticon). Again, I don't mean for these to be offensive and um.... mean. But please, if you wish to have a powerful character like this make a detailed bio explaining him. Perhaps there's a reason he has a frigate and maybe there's a reason he's so respected and great. But I don't think:
Cimil wrote:
| Quote: | | Kuan Ti is one of the last surviving Mandalorians. Not much else is known, he spends his time as a merc or in the Cantinas. He was one of the greatest warriors in the galaxy, feared by all. Now he is one of the best Bounty hunters in the galaxy. |
does it.
_________________
|
|
