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What should I call the story?

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Posted: Wed Apr 01, 2009 12:15 am
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Sirak Sazen Knight - 5th Degree Joined: 25 Sep 2008 Posts: 5595 Location: The Asylum RainaRose wrote: Raina is 16. Th first chapter sucked, I almost cried from how badly written it is. Yes that is you Invictus. No, the Sam is not Samuel. Wait. How old is her daughter? _________________ "I find it hard. It's hard to find, oh well, whatever, nevermind."

Posted: Sat Apr 11, 2009 11:59 pm
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RainaRose Sith Master Joined: 30 Oct 2008 Posts: 1989 Location: Kyle Todd Hawkins Raina is technically 16, and the little girl is adoptive. On her papers it says she's 19 but she looks 16-19. _________________ "If you take [a copy of] the Christian Bible and put it out in the wind and the rain, soon the paper on which the words are printed will disintegrate and the words will be gone. Our bible IS the wind and the rain."

Posted: Sun Apr 12, 2009 7:40 pm
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Darth Splinter Sith Master Joined: 14 Oct 2006 Posts: 2392 Location: In a quiet place... She is... the same age... as her daughter? That is a well deserved WTF. _________________ I'm the sensible, tactful, and non Jewish Sam.

Posted: Mon Apr 20, 2009 4:29 pm
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RainaRose Sith Master Joined: 30 Oct 2008 Posts: 1989 Location: Kyle Todd Hawkins No no the daughter is like 6. _________________ "If you take [a copy of] the Christian Bible and put it out in the wind and the rain, soon the paper on which the words are printed will disintegrate and the words will be gone. Our bible IS the wind and the rain."

Posted: Mon Apr 20, 2009 4:57 pm
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Crozeus Sith Master Joined: 02 Nov 2008 Posts: 2963 Location: Watching Dakoth get out brd... again Do more! _________________ thedarksithlords.myfreeforum.org A history lesson:

Posted: Wed Apr 22, 2009 11:56 am
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RainaRose Sith Master Joined: 30 Oct 2008 Posts: 1989 Location: Kyle Todd Hawkins I am going to get around to it soon. Chillax. _________________ "If you take [a copy of] the Christian Bible and put it out in the wind and the rain, soon the paper on which the words are printed will disintegrate and the words will be gone. Our bible IS the wind and the rain."

Posted: Mon Apr 27, 2009 8:47 pm
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Sirak Sazen Knight - 5th Degree Joined: 25 Sep 2008 Posts: 5595 Location: The Asylum I want a new post within 72 hours. If you do not comply with these demands, the bear gets it. _________________ "I find it hard. It's hard to find, oh well, whatever, nevermind."

Posted: Mon Apr 27, 2009 11:24 pm
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RainaRose Sith Master Joined: 30 Oct 2008 Posts: 1989 Location: Kyle Todd Hawkins O.o I have the chapter....started....it needs editing. DON'T HURT THE BEAR!!! PLEASE!!! _________________ "If you take [a copy of] the Christian Bible and put it out in the wind and the rain, soon the paper on which the words are printed will disintegrate and the words will be gone. Our bible IS the wind and the rain."

Posted: Sat May 02, 2009 10:50 pm
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Sirak Sazen Knight - 5th Degree Joined: 25 Sep 2008 Posts: 5595 Location: The Asylum Fine. You can have the bear now. I'll read the post later when I don't feel so lazy. _________________ "I find it hard. It's hard to find, oh well, whatever, nevermind."

Posted: Sat May 02, 2009 10:54 pm
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RainaRose Sith Master Joined: 30 Oct 2008 Posts: 1989 Location: Kyle Todd Hawkins YAY!! *runs away with the bear* _________________ "If you take [a copy of] the Christian Bible and put it out in the wind and the rain, soon the paper on which the words are printed will disintegrate and the words will be gone. Our bible IS the wind and the rain."

Posted: Sat May 02, 2009 11:09 pm
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Crozeus Sith Master Joined: 02 Nov 2008 Posts: 2963 Location: Watching Dakoth get out brd... again Yay. I liked it. Though I suggest you add a bit of description to the dialogue lines, especially towards the end. _________________ thedarksithlords.myfreeforum.org A history lesson:

Posted: Sat May 02, 2009 11:13 pm
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RainaRose Sith Master Joined: 30 Oct 2008 Posts: 1989 Location: Kyle Todd Hawkins Ya I threw the end kind of together. I do more detail on the next one. _________________ "If you take [a copy of] the Christian Bible and put it out in the wind and the rain, soon the paper on which the words are printed will disintegrate and the words will be gone. Our bible IS the wind and the rain."

Posted: Sun May 03, 2009 2:10 am
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Darth Splinter Sith Master Joined: 14 Oct 2006 Posts: 2392 Location: In a quiet place... I'm getting a pedophile vibe from Thilus. Good. Two characters introduced. I want me! _________________ I'm the sensible, tactful, and non Jewish Sam.

Posted: Sun May 03, 2009 4:50 am
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Sirak Sazen Knight - 5th Degree Joined: 25 Sep 2008 Posts: 5595 Location: The Asylum After reading that, I may go hunting for the bear again. It was amazing.   _________________ "I find it hard. It's hard to find, oh well, whatever, nevermind."

Posted: Sun May 03, 2009 9:37 pm
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RainaRose Sith Master Joined: 30 Oct 2008 Posts: 1989 Location: Kyle Todd Hawkins Thilus, Talen, Crozeus, Fectum, Invictus, we all some what introduced. Its going to take me a bit to get the Jedi introduced, the Sith come first. _________________ "If you take [a copy of] the Christian Bible and put it out in the wind and the rain, soon the paper on which the words are printed will disintegrate and the words will be gone. Our bible IS the wind and the rain."

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