Crimsion Red and Knights

RainaRose

Nope. I don't know when people are going to come in.

I am pretty sure that all memebers of Crimsion (AKA the Sith) will be coming in the next chapter.

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"If you take [a copy of] the Christian Bible and put it out in the wind and the rain, soon the paper on which the words are printed will disintegrate and the words will be gone. Our bible IS the wind and the rain."

Darth Splinter

I meant this question:

RainaRose

Oh woops. No I will be giving full details with what little informaton I have been given. There will be excellent detail put into the works, but I must be given the time to write or things will come out like my first chapter.
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"If you take [a copy of] the Christian Bible and put it out in the wind and the rain, soon the paper on which the words are printed will disintegrate and the words will be gone. Our bible IS the wind and the rain."

Lord Vexen

Oh joy, I'm a god of hate. Good story, one of the better ones I've read, and an awesome begining as well.

I voted for Road of Red and Blue, but I think Roads of Red and Blue sounds better, but I don't know how the story goes. So maybe road singular works better.
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RainaRose

I will see how things turn out. Roads might work.
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"If you take [a copy of] the Christian Bible and put it out in the wind and the rain, soon the paper on which the words are printed will disintegrate and the words will be gone. Our bible IS the wind and the rain."

Crozeus

Oh wow, this was really good. I'm liking it. And you kinda captured me (as a RL person) in it. So yay for Raina.
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thedarksithlords.myfreeforum.org

A history lesson:

Lord Invictus

...Am I this Invictus guy?

Wink

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Crozeus

No.
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thedarksithlords.myfreeforum.org

A history lesson:

Lord Invictus

That's Sam, right?
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Sirak Sazen

Please tell me you're going to be a writer some day. This was very very good and I'm craving the next chapter.

For the record, how old is Raina?
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"I find it hard. It's hard to find, oh well, whatever, nevermind."

RainaRose

Raina is 16. Th first chapter sucked, I almost cried from how badly written it is.

Yes that is you Invictus. No, the Sam is not Samuel.
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"If you take [a copy of] the Christian Bible and put it out in the wind and the rain, soon the paper on which the words are printed will disintegrate and the words will be gone. Our bible IS the wind and the rain."

Sirak Sazen

No... it was awesome.
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"I find it hard. It's hard to find, oh well, whatever, nevermind."

RainaRose

I think it sucked and I am so rewritting it to make it better....later.
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"If you take [a copy of] the Christian Bible and put it out in the wind and the rain, soon the paper on which the words are printed will disintegrate and the words will be gone. Our bible IS the wind and the rain."

Darth Splinter

Jiub · Knight - 5th Degree Joined: 30 Aug 2006 Posts: 2309