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  Xander Vos
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Except for the fact that by Mandalorian honour, two representatives of the group entered into unarmed contact, with the losing side submitting to the winners. Or at least that's what I've gathered from stuff I've read.



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  Talen D'aar
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See? I didn't know that. That makes sense.

But, to be honest, it wasn't my fault that I didn't know, it was, however, your fault that that part wasn't explained better...no offense. For the readers that haven't delved too deeply into the SW lore, it's usually common courtesy to add those little tidbits in there so you don't completely lose them when something out of place happens.
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  Xander Vos
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I guess, it was more something I did internally and just the whole 'they dissapeared. Mandalore said they were being repelled' suggested that all forces were being focussed there, sorry.

Like I think I said earlier, these stories are essentially very rough, just ideas formed about Korus that I wrote and published without much editting.

If you want to read stuff I put a lot more time into, check out the DE thread in this forum which has links to all the various stories I did revolving around that project.
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  Talen D'aar
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Yeah, I know how that can be when writing.

I'm not saying it was bad, just, you know...discussing your fanfiction. Razz

Yeah, I've read a little of it. I don't usually have time to sit and read, or I'm just lazy and let it slip.
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  Xander Vos
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Well most chapters of the actual Destiny Eclipse are segmented so you can essentially read them on their own.
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  Talen D'aar
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Well, if I have the time and get the inclination, I'll start up on that.

I've actually been thinking up my own fanfic, so if I ever get up the nerve to sit down and churn it out, I'd love to have a discussion about it too. Razz
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  Xander Vos
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What would it be about? Set when?
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  Talen D'aar
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Location: Surviving the harsh climates of Yanibar.

About Talen, a member of the Zeison Sha, who's search for a friend and fellow Zeison Sha'en(?) who's turned to the dark side, leads him to a secret Sith Temple on Yanibar. On the way though, he meets two Jedi, Master Inon Ziir and his Padawan Loerik, who are also investigating the whereabouts of a Sith Temple. Although Talen is less than thrilled to be working with them, he agrees and they head inside, where they find that a Sith Lord and his Apprentice, both of which the party knows, are growing an ancient means to combat the Jedi.

I hadn't decided time, thinking in the future, past the actual timeline or something, I don't know. Just a rough outline.
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  Xander Vos
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Sounds good. Better than that hunk of junk I wrote. Razz I just read through it and kind of remembered what was supposed to hapen. Jacen would take one of those two random people born as his Apprentice, whilst the other would train with Jaina, and eventually the Aprentice would be come Emperor, after Jacen and Jaina die, and they would fight each other.

Woo... Also the 1000 SDs?! Destroying hangar bays to beat Coruscant... Curses! Why didn't Thrawn think of that! Razz And rays in a ship that can take out an SD in a flash... Right... Razz
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  Talen D'aar
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I'm sure you thought it was the bee's knees back in the day. Razz
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I thought it was going to be this epically long trilogy... Razz

Oh and Hothrier, the Grand-Son of Hothrir from The Crystal Planet... I think? Original name. Razz
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  Talen D'aar
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lol They say great minds think alike.
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I'm guessing this is also discussion for your first fanfic. It's not bad at all for your first.
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I thought starting a new thread for it would be pointless. Razz
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  Talen D'aar
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Good call. Wink



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