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  Jiub
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Crozeus wrote:
And what about me, hmm? None of you would have the genius to think up a kiwi, sheep infatuated, English guy would you?


Um, no. That's all you man.



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Exactly.
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... I think I may need to discontinue Without Sin.

http://www.msnbc.msn.com/id/29430688/

You don't need to read it. I'll sum up:

1. There's a group of scientists working on "synthetic biology" - in other words, creating artificial organic substances.

Alright... sure. That's pretty much the driving force behind Without Sin - Armia trying to unleash the Yuuzhan Vong developed replicating goop on the galaxy, but that doesn't really mean...

2. They're trying to develop it to be self-sustaining and able to spread - but are having trouble.

... Okay. Fine. That's exactly the same problem the Empire ran into in Venom of the Empire when they tried to reproduce the substance. But that's still just...

3. The project's name... is AEGIS.

.....................................

WHAT THE FRAK?!

My story is obviously coming true - with frightening accuracy. So...

Lies of Bakura:
Chapter 5

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Rive and Korus flew the Narix back to Bakura. Garo was treated for his injuries and it turned out that the disturbance in the Force that everyone felt was just the chef burning the dinner meal and being really upset about it.

Armia Delvron turned over a new leaf and never bothered anyone again - in fact, she helped to cure every known disease in the galaxy using what she learned during her few years working with the Yuuzhan Vong.

Yiim starred on an off-Broadway play about the trials of being an alien from another galaxy. Massive success.

The seeds of rivalry between Abba and Rive never amounted to anything - they play tennis on Tuesdays now and are the best of friends.

Everyone lived happily ever after.
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I now hate you with a passion matched only by hitler's hate for the jews.


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I am, of course, just kidding around.

But that story DOES seriously freak me out. A synthetic organic development project... and it just happens to share its name with MY synthetic organic development project?

At least their AEGIS doesn't stand for the same thing as my AEGIS.
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Ok...


Post the damn chapter already!!!!! 've been waiting 2 months, hurry the hell up.


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Now you have competition from NASA. Recognition never hurt.
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Rive Caedo wrote:
I am, of course, just kidding around.

But that story DOES seriously freak me out. A synthetic organic development project... and it just happens to share its name with MY synthetic organic development project?

At least their AEGIS doesn't stand for the same thing as my AEGIS.


What does yours stand for?
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Hehe, I'd have to check. Let's see how close I can get without looking...

Advancements Ensuring Genetic Imperial Superiority.

And now... *digs into the Venom of the Empire thread* - I was actually pretty close!

Venom of the Empire, Page 8 wrote:
The computerized voice played again, "The following is a formal proposal for Project AEGIS."

A man's voice began speaking, presumably the man in the imperial uniform that had been displayed briefly, "Hello, I am Major Brekin Kadir of the Imperial Corps of Bioengineers. I am the project lead for the proposed Project AEGIS. Project AEGIS is intended to be a joint effort between the Department of Military Research and the Corps of Bioengineers."

The static filled holoprojection cleared up briefly to display the logos of the two Imperial branches.



"AEGIS stands for 'Advanced Engineering and Genetics for Imperial Sovereignty'


I actually like that better. Presumably the Empire is still trying to maintain the appearance of being a beneficial entity at this early point in the timeline. So working to protect "sovereignty" seems a bit 'nicer' than working to enhance your "superiority". Kudos to me from a year ago Razz

The real project AEGIS I just linked to stands for: 'Artificially Expanded Genetic Information System'
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Spooky. Razz

So when're the new chapters out?
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Angry Englishmen Given Indigenous Species.
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Korus Zhett wrote:
So when're the new chapters out?


Yes yes, I feel terrible (although slightly less terrible since I at least wrote up that multipage conclusion to Retribution of the Chosen and got it out on time Smile ).

I suspect tonight will not be the night to finally get it up - since it's Battlestar Galactica/Terminator night in the Caedo household (and Clone Wars too for that matter). But - I don't see any reason for it not to go up tomorrow.
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Hmph.

And speaking of, I discovered that Channel 10 plays them here 11.30 on a Saturday morning (Which was about an hour ago) purely by accident. Just had the ice world episode so it's not that far behind.
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Rive Caedo wrote:
But - I don't see any reason for it not to go up tomorrow.

Note to self: stop tempting fate.
This post brought to you via Rive's Wii - since his laptop's video card just failed.
Calling up Apple now to schedule a repair -_-

Hey hey! Nice! I forgot that the Wii has a USB port and keyboard support! Typing the above paragraph with the Wiimote and a virtual keyboard was... slow.

Well then. At least I can keep posting while the computer is in the shop. Maybe I'll even try to retype Chapter 5 or some other bonus material in the meantime. I mean, it's not like I'll have much else to do without a real computer around Wink
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If it's not up in one week, I support Dakoth's coup.  Mad



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