Discussion of Beginings.

Lyn Korak

Yeah, even me! Razz

I get annoyed at stuff as well, and lose it.

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Sephiroth

Ok, chapter three is done, and it's a little SHORT, but I think i got all i need for now. BTW, this takes place later when Leon actually is a Knight as he's older than me.
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Lyn Korak

Nice chapter. Only thing is, I guess you used the word drag too much.

"Haven't you people heard of closing the damn door?!?!" Laughing

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Sephiroth

Yeah, Leon is laid back now. Plus, Panic at the Disco is awesome.
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Lyn Korak

Eh, they're alright.
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Sephiroth

Chapter Four is finally done. It's good IMO and there is actually a reason for Sauv getting angry like that, but you have to wait to find out.
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Kisuk Kolar

Leon sounds a lot like Shikamaru
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Adenn

You love Naruto way too much. Laughing

Nice chapter.
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Sephiroth

Actually I don't really LOVE it, it like it a lot. But yeah, he's based on Shikamaru, but i think it's a good thing since he doesn't get angry over things and won't turn to the dark side again, plus he now has lots of patience. Unlike you Tomer Surprised

j/k
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"If you take [a copy of] the Christian Bible and put it out in the wind and the rain, soon the paper on which the words are printed will disintegrate and the words will be gone. Our bible IS the wind and the rain."

Sephiroth

I got chapter five. Hope you like it, I know the dialouge at the end may seem weird but I think it's good.
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Kisuk Kolar

I see someone knows their science
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Sephiroth

Yup, got an A in the class.
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Sephiroth

Chapter six is done. And once again I show just how damn smart I am. J/k

But you can see that I want to show some of Leon's past here and there. Do you like it?
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Lyn Korak

I like that effect. It's cool.

Sephiroth

Thanks Lyn. I thought it would be good to introduce some new characters.

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