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  Butler_Swan
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yeah, it's to show that thats what he updated



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YAY an Update Great job Rive.
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dear lord an update!
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  Rive Caedo
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An update to a really old story? Why not!

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Rive awoke - again. This time without a jolt and with a pounding pain in his head and still quiet blind.

The effects of the spice had apparently worn off, he was breathing fine, and the room wasn't spinning. All in all it was a substantial improvement over the last time he work up.

Except for the fact his hands were bound together behind him.

The raspy voice and the deep voice were nowhere to be heard. Rive took his chances and hopped up to his feet and bumped his way around until he found an exit. Striding along, hands bound behind his back, and head wrapped entirely in bloody bandages, Rive didn't draw a single stare as he walked down the streets of Coruscant's Undercity. There were plenty of stranger things down this deep.

He continued like this until he heard a group of friendly sounding - comparatively speaking - Rodians talking nearby.

"There's 50 credits in it for the first one of you to slice these binds and rip open some holes for my eyes in this bandage"

Money talks in the depths of the city-world. Within moments he was walking away from a the bundle of Rodian's who were arguing who had torn the holes first and how to split it with the one who cut the wrist bindings.

The first place he headed was right back to B'ruk's and the Raspy Voice's place... and there she was - his ticket out of here.

The droid star fighter he'd "piloted" down here - the wings were replaced with some old Z-95 wings welded on, the engines looked like they'd been patched up with Bantha hides, but... it was repaired.

Rive's attempts to pry the newly installed cockpit were thwarted by the deep voice - B'ruk: "What in the Nine Corellian Hells do you think you're doing, boy?"

B'ruk was apparently a Barabel. Large, reptilian, and holding a large wrench.

This didn't look good.

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Lol Rive is wearing a zorro mask.
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A blood red one. You should post more often.
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  Rive Caedo
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Well it's only been a little over 3 months since the last update - far less than the 10 month gap since the one before that Razz

Hm... should only be 2-3 more chapters before the end of this Episode.

Also: New Logo to replace that ugly text one that's been sitting there for nearly 2 years!

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Suddenly the Barabel dropped his tail and his eyes softened, "Oh! Apologies, sir. Didn't realize yous was the proper owner of this here fine craft. We was wondering where you run off to."

"Figured we'd need to sell it to a less astute customer - clever of ya to power up the engines with a blaster's energy pack," said a tiny rodent-like Chadra-Fan drawing himself out from under the modified Droid Starfighter, "won't need to do that again, we got a... classic... Incom Slipstream X7 reactor core wired in!"

He shook Rive's slightly bloodied hand with his own furry, very greasy hand enthusiastically, "Got her patched up and good to go, Master Jedi! 'Fraid I'll need to charge you 200 extra credits to keep us quiet about you being down here - keep the Empire off your back, eh? Brings the total to 8,200 credits"

It was extortion, the "classic" Slipstream reactor had been issued with the Z-74 Starfighter, nearly 4 decades ago, and 8,000 credits was enough to buy a new Z-95 anyway - not to mention the fact that the Slipstream was too powerful for the tiny Droid Starfighter's engines and would probably blow them out within a week at the max - but Rive kept these thoughts to himself, he would have paid twice the amount to get out of the Undercity - "Ah, Empire?"

"That's right, ain't it? You been knocked out on our table for a solid week, haven't ya! You missed an entire regime change in the galaxy!"

"That's... interesting. I'm no Jedi anyway, just a guy who was in the right place at the wrong time."

"Oh? Well, my apologies - I'll need to charge you 200 more credits then, we give Jedi a 400 credit discount. That'd be... 8,400." he said with a toothy grin - or a sneer, it was a bit hard to tell with Chadra-Fans. B'ruk - the Barabel, chuckled.

Rive sighed, "Of course," he retrieved a cred-chip from his pocket and authorized it for a 8,900 credit transfer - the extra 500 credits would help to ensure they didn't shoot him down on his way up - to keep the money and the scrapheap of a ship.

From the looks of how the engines were patched up, it'd probably be a one-way trip.

Fandar immediately scanned the cred-chip, after a moment the transaction cleared - draining probably a third of Rive's savings, "Happy travels! And remember, if you're ever in the Undercity - you'll get a 10% repeat customer discount at Fandar and B'ruk's Starshop!"

"Yes, thank you," Rive said, faking a smile - 10% off extortion was still extortion - as he hopped into the junker cockpit (although it was far more comfortable than smashing himself into the original Droid Starfighter's lack of a cockpit).

With a stutter and a whine, Rive was headed back out of the Undercity - nearly 9,000 credits poorer, missing generous portions of skin and blood, and a blaster power-pack (he was half-surprised the two had left the blaster with the ship at all, rather than claiming it had been "lost", it had to be worth at least 200 credits)... And there was still no guarantee he'd make it back to the surface in this mutt of a ship.

B'ruk and Fandar waved him off with a smile and the nearest thing a Barabel could manage to one.


Wee!

Also, Fandar - if you're interested, is an obscure little Chadra-Fan from the series spawned by the abhorred Glove of Darth Vader series. He works for the Rebel Alliance as a scientist/engineer in that series, so I suppose his fortunes change over the course of 20 years or so Very Happy
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nice keep going?

and another question who was the jedi waht species was he???

the great jedi mystery? who was he where did he come from and how did he make it out of the temple???
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In my mind he was actually a Jedi assigned to a mission in the mid-levels of Coruscant and was rushing towards the Jedi Temple to help with the fight.

Beyond that - I had no intentions for that Jedi, seeing as I killed him shortly after he appeared Very Happy

If I changed the wording a bit, it could appear to be that Jedi that jumped in front of Bail Organa in Episode III - but no, that occurred higher up than Rive was.
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u can't use him that Kid was a padawan and he had a name and he was also gl's son he adopted i used to have him as my avtar gosh i forgot his name.
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It was Zett Jukassa (http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Zett_Jukassa). And why can't I use him, lol? I killed him in this story in the same way he died in the movie - who's to say Rive wasn't nearby when it happened?

But, no, that occurred far too close to the Jedi Temple for Rive to see - it wasn't Zett that Rive saw die to a flurry of Clone troopers.



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