Tom
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Vanders Assignments, Tests...Give me a 100 word essay at least on your favorite star wars film and character, 100 words each that is...
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Darth Morte
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Real Bio:
Name: Mike Horak
Age: 15
Gender: Male
Character Bio:
Name: Chris Vander
Age: 15
Gender: Male
My Assignment: 100 words essay at least on your favorite Star Wars film and Character. 100 words each.
Essay#1- Star Wars film
My favorite Star Wars film is Episode III: Revenge of the Sith. E-III is my favorite because it is Action packed and Adventurous.
Star Wars Episode III is a movie full of Action. Action parts of the movie include the Battle of Mygeeto, the Attack on the Jedi Temple, and the Battle between Yoda and Palpatine. The action parts of the movie are the best parts of the movie because they will have you at the edge of your seats.
The Adventure parts of the movie are the ones that will have you wondering whats gonna happen next and you will be pondering about whats already happening. The Adventure parts of the movie include, Yoda's Exile trip and Anakin's visit to Mustafar.
Essay#2- Star Wars Character
My favorite Star Wars Character is Anakin Skywalker. Anakin Skywalker is a boy of natural and physical born talent. His skill in the weilding of a Lightsaber is absolutely sophisticated beyond all beings. Anakin's power was beyond any reach of any Jedi Knight or any Sith Being. Anakin is also my favorite character because he is a skillfull warrior when it comes to fights. His knowledge is overwhelmingly acknowledged during battles. Anakin is surpassingly the Best Jedi/Sith warrior ever in the history of Star Wars.
Character Bio for Anakin Skywalker:
Name: Anakin Skywalker
Born: On an unknown Planet possibly Tattooine
Bio:
Anakin Skywalker was born a child prodigy. His skills in Mathematics and Engineering was surrpasingly higher than an Adult. At the Age of Eight He discovered an Ancient War Droid that was used during the Ancient Sith War 4,000 years earlier. Upon returning to Watto he found a person who was shocked at what the young boy found. The person told Anakin of what the Droid was from and it's past. When Anakin was 9 he met Qui-Gon-Ginn and Padme Amidala-his future Wife.
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Tom
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Write a short story depicting an adventure for Vander and Kenobi
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Darth Morte
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Chapter 1: The Beginning
Kenobi came to Vander and said "Apprentice we are needed at the front lines immediately!" Vander was happy that his first battle was with his Master. Vander said "Alright, and where is it at and how do we get there Master?" Kenobi with shock answered " My Young Apprentice you will be briefed on the mission when we get to the ship." Vander was sad that he did not get briefed sooner. Vander reported to the ship to find his Master waiting for him. Kenobi quickly went into briefing. "Alright listen up everybody our spies have located a Sith Manufacturing Facility on the planet Dantooine. Our spies also have located some Ancient Holocrons that must be retreived at all costs." Vander was amazed at how much his Master knew already. Kenobi then stated "I myself will be leading this raid and my Young Apprentice Vander will be commanding Brigade's 1 through 4."
When Kenobi said "Any Questions?" Vander quickly stammered and said "Why am I commanding Brigade's 1 through 4? I've never commanded anything in my life!" Kenobi was anxious to tell his young apprentice but sensed that the time was not yet right. "Vander all will be said in good time." Kenobi said with a calm and smooth voice. Vander did not want to anger his Master so he quickly said "Alright were is my troops?" Kenobi said "Wait till the briefing is over." Vander sat back down and began to listen. "Alright, Brigade's 5 through 10 will come with me and destroy the Sith Manufacturing Facility, While Brigade's 1 through 4 led by Vander will destroy the surrounding perimeters and take out the Anti-Air defenses and Anti-Tank Field." Vander stood up and said "Good Luck everybody and May The Force Be With You!"
When Vander reported to his designated area of the Hanger he soon found that Brigade's 1 through 4 is very large and Vander is then meeted by Colonel followed by 2 Captains. The Colonel said "Sir all ships are fueled and ready to fight!" Vander said "Good, now lets get to the ship." The Colonel went into a state of confusion and said "Sir what ship?" Vander turned around and said "The ship we are taking to the surface!"
The Colonel started to laugh and said "Sir sorry about that I see that you are new to commanding but we are not taking ships to the surface because the heavy Anti-Tank and Anti-Destroyers will take us out before we even get through the atmosphere!" Vander thought for a moment and said "Then what are we taking?" The Colonel then pointed to a spot outside the hanger and said "Over there!" Vander looked in the direction given to him by the Colonel and quickly jumped back at the site he was seeing. He saw 4 Acclamator Ships in a little spot around the Main Ship. The Colonel started to laugh again and said "This Sir is Brigade's 1 through 4, we are ready to embark on your command."
Vander then said "Alright are you the Colonel of these Brigade's?" The Colonel looked puzzled and then said "No i'm incharge of Brigade's 1 and 2. The other Brigade's are led by the General." Vander said "OK" and left to tell Kenobi that they were on there way to do there objectives. When Kenobi finished talking to Vander he went and took control of his Fleet which was on the opposite side of the Main Ship. Vander went back to the Colonel and said "Alright lets move out!" The Colonel told the men he was with and told them to get the Republic Gunship ready to disembark back to there fleet. The Colonel caught up to Vander and said "Sir we must leave immediately! We are approaching the planet's surface. Vander went with the Colonel and got into the Republic Gunship and took off out into the direction of his fleet. As Vander grew closer to his fleet he noticed that his fleet was bigger than thought.
OOC: Is this the way you wanted it to be? And if so I will finish the rest later.
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Tom
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Cool, just more detail, and it owuld be cool if u mentioned Vikro or something (My former master ) and post it in the fan fic thread and see how people reply etc,
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Darth Morte
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Ok cool thnx for the advice
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Darth Morte
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When Vander steeped off the Republic Gunship he noticed somebody walking towards him from the entrance to the upperdeck. The clone was walking faster and faster at Vander and when the clone finally reached him he saw that it was the General! The General quickly said with excitment "Sir it is a pleasure to finally meet you!" Vander quickly said "Pleasure to meet you to General." The General then said "Alright we are need in the Upperdeck immediately Kenobi wants a word with you. Vander and the General walked through the door that led up to the Upperdeck area of the ship and on the way he noticed Gunship after Gunship landed in the hanger. When they finally reached the Upperdeck he saw Kenobi on the Holo-Projector.
Kenobi saw Vander and said "Vander I see that you have met the General." Vander said "Yes and I'm starting to feel at home here." Kenobi then said "The General has served for the Republic a very long time. I remember when I was a young apprentice like yourself with my former Master Vikro. Vikro was a great and powerful Jedi who will always be remembered as a hero." Vander quickly said "Master what happened to him?" Kenobi with some thought said "Not now you can ask at a more reasonable time." Vander was anxious for his Master to tell him but knew he would not until the time was right. The General then said " Yes Vikro was a powerful one alright I remember when I served under him during a mission long ago, he was very smart and cunning in battle." Vander was amazed and wanted to know more about Kenobi's former Master but knew he would have to wait because they were almost at Dantooine's Atmosphere.
Vander said "Master you will have to excuse me I have to get ready to approach the surface of the planet." Kenobi was surprised at what Vander said and wondered if he will do fine. Kenobi with uneasiness said "Be carefull and May The Force Be With You my young apprentice!" Vander turned around and said "See you on the planets surface!" After that the Holo-projector cut off and Vander walked out of the room. Upon reaching the hanger he saw thousands of clone's lined up in single file waiting to land. To the left he saw AT-XT's, Republic Speeders, AT-RT's,AT-TE's and many more vehicles piled up. To the right he could see a mass of V-Wings, Republic Starfighters, ARC-200's and many other space vehicles.
Vander boarded one of the Republic Gunships and took off from the hanger with thousands of other Gunships and vehicles and headed for the Planets surface with the Acclamator ships trailing behind. The entrance to the planets surface was a fierce and deadly one. The Anti-Destroyers and Anti-Tanks were tearing up the Republic Gunships before they even landed. Vander thought to himself "Hmm how could I stop them from firing at us?" Vander thought for a moment until his Gunship was hit and was going down!! Vander and some of the men inside the Gunship jumped and landed safely while the others perished. The men that jumped with Vander stood behind him supporting him with heavy fire and stayed with him until the reinforcements could land. Vander looked up and saw hundreds of Republic Gunships Blaze across the Sky like fierce lightning falling and behind it the Acclamator Assault Ships roaring accross the sky like Lions.
Vander knew that Dantooine would fall into the Jedi's control so his first task was to take out the Anti-Fire. A couple of Gunships dropped some reinforcements where Vander was and together quickly paced themselves until they got to the Anti-Fire Machinery. The Clone Captain said "Sir look there an entrance into a Building should we check it out?" Vander nodded and a few Clone's rushed to the door like foxes running from dogs. When the Clone's got to the door it was unlocked. The Clone's bulldozed through the door and shots rang out like church bells and explosions were heard from the outside and some Clone's came running outside yelling "TAKE COVER IT'S GONNA BLOW!!!" Vander rushed to the nearest cover and watched in fascination the 1st of many Anti-Fire Go up in a blaze of defeat. Vander and the Clone's continued on to the next building holding the next Anti-Fire weaponry. This time Vander kicked down the door and rushed in like a speeding bullet and the Clone's stayed and provided covering fire. Vander rushed to the main valve and turned it on high and yelled "Hey Captain! I need an explosive!" The Captian rushed over to Vander and gave him some C-4 and set the timer for 1 minute and rushed out of there.
Vander turned around and watched as the 2nd Anti-Fire went up in smoke. A transmission came in it was Kenobi!! He is on his way with more troops and needs all the Anti-Fire destroyed by the time he gets there. Vander knew he did not have alot of time left so he sent a transmission to the Assault Ship saying that they need to land now! The Assault Ship sent back a message "Sir we cannot land at this time take out the last 2 Anti-Fire or they will be destroyed. Vander grew impatient and said "Troops lets move out only 2 more Anti-Fire to go and this crappy mud-pit is ours!" The Clone's cheered with glory and victory but it was cut short due to the Anti-Fire they still needed to take out.
Vande and the Clone's continued on to the 3rd building and planted the C-4 and ran like crazy out of there. A transmission came in from the front lines it was the Captain "Sir the front lines cant hold on much longer we need those Anti-Fire taken out now!" Vander said "The Anti-Fire is almost completely destroyed only 1 more left and they can safely land." The Captain said "Yes Sir over and out." Vander turned his Comm. off and turned towards the next Anit-Fire but was amazed about it. The 4th Anti-Fire was surrounded by a Shield!! they were going to need some heavy fire. Vander sent a transmission to the Assault Ship and 5 V-Wings poured out and headed for the Shield. Vander told the Clone's to "TAKE COVER!" The Shield was quickly disabled and the Clone's were able to enter the building and destroy the last Anti-Fire.
Vander sent a transmission to the Assault Ships saying that they can now safely land. Vander also sent a transmission to Kenobi saying that the Anti-Fire was completely destroyed. Kenobi answered back saying "good work my young apprentice you have done exceptionally well. I will see you on the surface." Vander saw his Master land not far from where he was and waited for his Master to arrive out of the ship. Vander saw his Master run out of the ship along with thousands of Clone's yelling and charging towards the Main Gate to the Entrance to the Sith Manufacturing Facility.
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Darth Morte
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Kenobi heard Vander yelling and rushed over to him and said "What are you doing just standing around we have a Sith Manufacturing Facility to destroy!" Vander laughed and said "I know so let's get going!" Kenobi nodded and together both Vander and Kenobi rushed to the front of the Sith Manufacturing Facility and together bursed down the heavy metal gate and rushed in destroying machinery after machinery until most of it was all gone. Vander and Kenboi both went into the Main Tower and retreived tha Acient Holocrons and destroyed the Machinery holding there technology. Vander and Kenobi returned to the Assault Ship and put the Holocrons were they go and when everybody was on the Ship and Republic Gunships they took off into deep space. Yet another crushing blow to the Sith. Again the JEDI WIN!
Written By: Vander
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Tom
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Okay , give me a run down on the 7 forms of lightsaber combat techniques, then tell me what that form may be most useful for. Then tell me your preferred form and why u prefer it.
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Darth Morte
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Form I: Shii-Cho Determination Form
Form II: Makashi Contention Form
Form III: Soresu Resilience Form
Form IV: Ataru Aggresion Form
Form V: Shien/ Djem So Perserverance Form
Form VI: Niman Moderation Form
Form VII: Juyo/ Vaapad Ferocity form
Form I: Shii-Cho is the most ancient style of lightsaber combat, developed by early Jedi Masters to incorporate key principels of ancient sword-fighting traditions.
Form II: Makashi Described as being very elegant, powerful, and requiring extreme precision, allowing the user to attack and defend with minimal effort, often wielding the blade one-handed for the greater range of movement and fluidity.
Form III: Soresu combat utilized motions that occured very close to the body, in an attempt to acheive near-total protection and expend as little energy as possible while executing moves.
Form IV: Ataru users could move at amazing speeds and could rain strong blows, jumping and attacking through the air. Powerful and lightning fast spinning attacks could be utilized from all angles, either from ground or air.
Form V: Shien/ Djem So was a powerful style developed by Form III practitioners that preferred a more offensive style, since the defensive nature of Form III often led to dangerous prolonged combat.
Form VI: Niman attempted to balance all elements of lightsaber combat, combining the Forms that came before in to a less intensely demanding combat style. The result was that the user's skill in each individual area of lightsaber combat was relatively moderate.
Form VII: Juyo/ Vaapad is the most challenging and demanding of all forms, Form VII required intense focus, a high degree of skill, and mastery of other forms.
My choice: If I could it would be Niman / Jar'ki but out of the 7 forms present i would choose Ataru
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Darth Morte
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Master when is my next task?
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Tom
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Explain to me the goals of the sith, and make up a sith code...
Then explain to me the jedis goal , and their code...
Then compare them.... and in your honnest oppinoin tell me which one you think is stronger and why.
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Darth Morte
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Sith Goals:
Ultimate Power was a goal the the Sith have tried to obtain for a long time because with it they could control the galaxy and wipe the universe clean of Jedi.
Sith Code:
Peace is Treason, there is only Power.
Through Power, I gain strength.
Through strength, I gain Wisdom.
Through Wisdom, I gain Rage.
Through Rage, the Force is broken.
The Force shall set me free.
Jedi Goals:
The goals of the Jedi were to maintain piece throughout the galaxy and thwart any Sith/Imperial activity through time. The Jedi had many other goals like protecting the public from Evil and are also involved with the task of protecting Ambassadors and Leaders.
Jedi Code:
Jedi are the peace keepers of the galaxy.
Jedi use the Force to defend and to protect.
Jedi respect all life, in any form.
Jedi improve themselves through knowledge and training.
Comparison:
The Jedi used the Force to protect and to bring peace.
The Sith used the Force to anihilate and try to obtain ultimate power to rule the Galaxy.
The Jedi used an assortment of colors for their Sabers including Purple, Blue, Green, Light Blue, etc..
The Sith used 1 or more colors but the primary one was Red.
The Sith used the "Code of Two" meaning that there can be only 2 Sith, the Master and the Apprentice.
The Jedi also used the "Code of Two" with their Younglings and Padawans.
My Opinion:
In my opinion the Jedi are a lot stronger than the Sith because with the "Code of Two" there was only 2 Sith but the Jedi had many more Masters and Padawans and Knights than the Sith would ever have.
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Darth Morte
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Master it has been 8 days I need an assignment.
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SkywalkerAndVader
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All right, since he isn't going to give you one, I have the authority to do so. So here you go.
Tell me which Era of the Star Wars is your favorite and why. Doesn't have to be too long, and take your time on it.
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Darth Morte
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My favorite Era would have to be Rise of The Empire.
The reason why its my favorite is because it has a great story-line, and it has very detailed battles and a wide variety of new characters such as Durge and General Grievous. The main and important reason why the Rise of the Empire is my favorite is because of the Clone Wars. The Clone Wars is my favorite part because of the Clone Troopers and the battles that take place. The story line is very nice and detailed and a few michevious events happen during this time.
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SkywalkerAndVader
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Mine would have to be the Rebellion Era. The time period that made Star Wars what it is, with all the great characters like Darth Vader of course, and Ben Kenobi, its just classic.
And nice job, if kenobi doesn't give you an assignment soon then I, or someone else on the Council will give you another.
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Darth Morte
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ok (dang i have to wait another 7 days) lol
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Tom
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Name me your Favorite star wars book.
The a character which only appears in the books, eg, Nick Rostu from Shatterpoint etc...
at least 50 words describing the book, and 50 words describing the character and why you like him and other things.
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Darth Morte
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mine is Escape from Dagu:
THE BOOK:
The book is about Shaak-Ti and her attempt to free Captive Clone Troopers trapped on the planet of Dagu. Shaak-Ti's mission did not go so well because of a Dark Acolyte by the name of Artel Darc. Artel Darc was a very powerful Dark Jedi. Shaak-Ti's attempt was to pretend that she was a Prisoner and break free from there and free the Troopers.
THE CHARACTER:
My favorite character would have to be Shaak-Ti because she is a legendary Jedi Master who has thwarted many of the Sith's Plans for Domination for many planets. Shaak-Ti fends off Artel Darc with her powerful attacks and she also tries to defeat Artel while the prisoners try to escape but is failure because of the Sith stationed on the encampment
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Tom
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Give me your views on Clone troopers, good or bad , etc...
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Darth Morte
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My view on the clone troopers is a good one because they are like the main characters in the story line because if there were no clone troopers then there probably wouldnt of been any stormtroopers. The clone trooper is also good because there are many different variety's of clone's including Commander, Sergeant, Lieutenant, Private and so forth. A standard clone trooper usually carries a Pistol and a Blaster Rifle and Thermal Detonators. The Clones were also good because instead of having the Jedi all fight they could have some normal soliders fight with them instead of the Jedi being out numbered 50,000 to 1.
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Dork of Mordork
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As you asked, here's an assignment for you since Tom hasn't given you one in a while.
I would like you to research the origins of the Jedi, how they started, where they founded, stuff like that.
It doesn't have to be too long, but don't make it short. And make it in your words.
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Darth Morte
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In the Deep Core of the Galaxy there was a planet called Tython. It has been said that Tython was the planet that the Jedi Order was established.
The best philosophers, priests, and warriors met on this planet, there they had a meeting about their findings about the mystical enigmatic Ashla. Dissidents that used Bogan eventually rose, starting the Force Wars. The Jedi formed from the Wars that were fought on Tython. Jedi Forge quickly led to the invention of the Lightsaber, which was intended for attacks that were out of Tython. A small group left Tython to liberate other planets and free them, thus creating the Jedi Knights. The then settled down on the planet Ossus creating a Philosophy School. The Philosophy School was used to define the Light Side and the Dark Side. The School also taught the young about the Living Force and the Unifying Force.
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Dork of Mordork
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That was good, good job.
I can give you another in a day or two if Tom is still gone.
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Darth Morte
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that would be cool
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Dork of Mordork
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Alright, since he hasnt been here, as I promised, here's an assignment:
Go play RuneScape.
Okay, not really. Meet me in the RP section for a training duel. Don't blame me if I take too long, I am playing RS at the moment.
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Dakoth
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n00bscape!
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Lyn Korak
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Sorta have to agree with Dakoth here, lol.
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Darth Morte
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ok cool
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Dork of Mordork
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| Lyn Korak wrote: | | Sorta have to agree with Dakoth here, lol. |
Yeah even though you were telling me you wanted to try it the other day.
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Dakoth
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LYN! Is this true!!!
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Xander Vos
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Well, I tried it, spent half an hour doing the tutorial, only to start in some place filled with people calling me a n00b. No thanks.
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Dakoth
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| Xander Vos wrote: | Well, I tried it, spent half an hour doing the tutorial, only to start in some place filled with people calling me a n00b. No thanks.  |
Runescape = Runescape!
Come to the WoW side, We can rule the forum as Pwner and n00b!
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Xander Vos
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I don't like WoW either, though CS and Warcraft 3 are pretty awesome.
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Dakoth
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| Xander Vos wrote: | | I don't like WoW either, though CS and Warcraft 3 are pretty awesome. |
Wtf?! do you have no soul!
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Lyn Korak
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| Dakoth wrote: | LYN! Is this true!!! |
No. I said I had played it before, and didn't like it much.
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SkywalkerAndVader
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Stop spamming up the assignment thread....take it to GD if you need to.
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Tom
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You have 4 trials:
Trial of Skill: This consistes of a lightsaber duel with either another person or a manifestation of the dark side. (The latter is like the Luke verse Vader dreamsequence, preminition etc, form ESB)
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Darth Morte
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cool and when does my first trial start?
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SkywalkerAndVader
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When you make a thread for it, asking for a dark-sider to fight you.
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Dakoth
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| SkywalkerAndVader wrote: | | Stop spamming up the assignment thread....take it to GD if you need to. |
sheesh, fine. party pooper
Oh and good luck Vandar
SPAMMIDY SPAM!
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Darth Morte
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*Sorry for the Necro-Post, but this is important.*
Well I would like for my trials to be started over from the very beginning. I have posted for a new master and no one answered me.
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Tom
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Thats cause u dissappeared and i forgot about ya lolz
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Darth Morte
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That is the very opposite but true.
You did forget about me BUT, you forgot about me while I was ACTIVE and never even responded back to me in the PM's that I would constantly send you asking about my training. Did I get a response? NO!
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Tom
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LOl u dissappeared for a while, so dont deny it, and your constant harrassing got so bad i stopped going on AIM just to avoid ya
And dont tell me when i do and don't forget..
Plus i think it be better if we went out seperatre ways..
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Darth Morte
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You really want to know why I dissapeared? The reason being that I got into a Car Accident! Yes, a Car Accident. I was gone for a month and a half. I did not harrass you! I reminded you every other day or every 7 days to post in my training thread. So don't lie saying I harrassed you. I may have reminded you a little too much but I DID NOT harrass you!
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Jaden Nightsaber
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Alright, alright. If you two wish to part ways that is fine. The Council will continue your training until you are ready for the Trials.
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Darth Morte
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Thank you, Jaden.
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Tom
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Harassing, constant reminders, got annoying !
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Xander Vos
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Then perhaps you should have done your job as his master and replied to them.
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Tom
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I come on here to have fun xander, not to be constantly pestered into a new assignment a day. That isnt fun!
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Dork of Mordork
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If you don't like having an apprentice, then drop Vander, and he can get another master if he chooses. (No offence to anyone of course.)
If the whole M/A thing isn't "your thing" then that's totally fine. And if you ever do consider taking another apprentice someday, just make sure they know you're more casual, if that's the right word. Meaning, you just like to have every so often assignments, rather than "okay do this" and then the next day "go do that." Get what I mean?
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Jaden Nightsaber
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The Council has taken up Vander's training until he is ready for the trials.
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