Mr.bigmac
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The Vision.I didnt go back and read read it yet, so there are bond to be mistakes in it. I will fix it later.
Chapter 1-To Be A Jedi
"What is your Problem Brighteyes?! This is a Defensive exersice. Meaning you Defend yourself! Nothing more then that."
"Yes master. I wont do that again." Weeze said half heartedly.
He was in the middle of a training session that was only focusing on defense. Weeze was a tall proud boy of avarge hieght. Strong, smart, and a Jedi. He had yet to be choosen by a Jedi to become there apprentice. At this time he was only 14. By this time few believed he would ever be choosen. But Weeze did not give up. I will become a Jedi Weeze thought getting ready for the coming attacks. He tuned back into what the class Teacher was saying.
"Weeze you are strong, bright, and well..your a damn good fighter. But your problem is you dont listin. You dont think. To be a Jedi is to safeguard peace in the galaxy. To be a Jedi is to defend justice against tyranny. To be a Jedi is to rely on the Force. To be a Jedi is to not love or live as normal people do…at whatever the price. Do you understand me?"
"Yes master. I will try my hardest to do better." Weeze was so tried of these lectures. They all said the same thing just in a diffrent words. They all spoke of peace and defense. Some times the best defense was a good offence. But few of the master would even listen to him. Sure it was hate and aggresion that drove people to the dark side. But what if you could fine the perfect balance of hate and love? Could he still be considered a jedi? These thoughts went thru his head as the spar started up once again....
Chapter 2-The Shroud of Doubt
It has been a year since that sparing match. Weeze had grown taller. He had begun to shave a little. He was not starting to look more like a man. And most important of all, he had matured. He was starting to learn what it meant to be a jedi. The Jedi code was becoming more and more apart of him. He still had his fews on how things should work, but every Jedi had that. What made him change was he was beginning to mature enough to relize how he had to do it.
The Jedi Council wanted to send the padawans on a training execise on Dantooine. They were Spilt into 3 diffrent groups. 1 group had Been told they were to find a hidden cave on Dantooine and rescue a "injured prisoner". Each person in group one had a diffrent cave intrence they were supose to enter to try and find there prisoner. The Secound group was supose to defend the the caves and all prisoners. The thrid and final group was supose to try and find a way out and any information about a Certin crystal located some were deep in the caves.
Weeze was assigen to be in the first group. He was droped off at his "Drop off point" and was on his way to find entrance 12B. 3 days had past and he could feel a group of force users near by. He knew it wouldnt take him long to find the caves now. Jogging slowly across the grassey plains he could see the caves on the horizon. But it was getting late and he had spent the last 3 days jogging with out any sleep and little food. He was treid and need much deserved rest. The moment he laid out his cot and put his head down he was gone. Sevral hours later Weeze was woken up by a noise. Instantly reaching for his lightsaber and jumping up and turned tword the intruder only to fine it was a old man. The man had his arm covering his face waiting for the coming blow to end his life. Weeze instaed of killing the man asked him what he was doing.
"What the HELL are you doing!? You shouldnt be sneaking around some ones camp like that!" Weeze wasnt at all madd that ther man was sneaking around his camp. He was mad because he woken up from his sleep.
"Im sorry, i didnt know you were a jedi, or alive. I just thought you were a run away slave or somthing who had died out here."
"What would you have done if i was dead?" weeze asked.
"Well eat you of course. No good letting good meat go to waste." The man laughed in a high pitched voice. Instantly Weeze relized he was insane. "But seeing as you are alive i will be on my way. But before i go, Why are you here Jedi? We are at peace."
"Im here on a training exersice. But what do you mean you are at peace?"
"I mean the only time a jedi go to a planet is to start a war."
"Thats not true! Jedi ensure peace, freedom and try to help anyone an everyone they can."
"HAHA!" The old man fell down laughing. "Jedi and peace? You are young, but even one as young as you should see past the lies your older Jedi tell. Look at your history, Jedi have always been in the center of every war. And im not talking about your so called Sith. Actual "Good" jedi. Think about it, who cause the great jedi civil war? The jedi did. Who not only fought, but lead the battles of the clone wars? Think about every major war and you will see a jedi some were in there. They lie about protecting peace, there just as bit power hngry as regular people."
What the old man had said was true. The jedi have been apart of every war. And every war he knew about, he knew it had change the jedi order. Slowly but surely, he began to once again doubt the way of the jedi. Was it not true that the Jedi tried to train them slef to become stronger and more powerful then the sith? Or other people for that matter. Looking back up he saw the old man walking away.
"Remeber what i told you Jedi. See through the lies and you will see the secerts the Jedi Council trys to hide from the entire galaxy."
Then he was gone. The next morning he would wake up and finsh his assigment. But he would never forget that starnge old man. What he said would haunt him. He would see more and more things that didnt seem right to him. To many questions left un answerd by his masters. Everytime they spoke, the only left him with more questions...
Chaper 3- The Vision
Sevral months went by and Weeze could feel a rift forming between him and his fellow jedi Padawans. The Jedi teachers frown upon him, they acted he was a sith. The spoke to him as if he were going to leave the Jedi to join the ranks of the sith. Everytime he asked question, they told him the same thing. He wanted answers. But no one would tell him anything. More and more he was beginning to beleive the old man. The jedis seemed to all be trying to hide something. And when ever he questioned, he wold be shuned.
Weeze, now at the age of 16, had spent most of his day working with his lightsaber, was tried. All he wanted to do was go to bed and sleep. But even his dreams wouldnt give it a rest. He had many dreams about the jedi and there lies. Bu on this night, he had a very diffrent dream. It seemed that the force was trying to tell him something.
The dream started out with showing Weeze the galaxy. When it got to the deep Core, he could see a person. The dream started to zoom in on the person. The person was holding to lighstabers. One was red, the other was silver.The left side was holding the red lightsaber, that side was in shadow, as if all darkness went to the left side of the body. The side with the silver blade, was all light. The dream kept zooming in on the person, until Weeze relized who the person was.It was him! Every once in a while, he would lean tword the dark side, and light side.Then he could hears words starting to form. On the Bright side of him, he could hear words like, Lies, Tricked, Hiddin, Corrupt. On the Dark side he saw words like, Power, Hate, Destroy, Fear. Then Weeze began to see himself being tortured, as if the words were hurting him. Finaly he saw him self taking both the lightsabers and stabing himself in the chest.
With that, Weeze woke up with sweet pooring off him like he was a water fall. Fear and wonder covered his body almost instently. What had the dream ment? Was it just a bunch of words and non-since? or was it really supose to tell himself something.
He thought about it for a long moment. Then he started to put it togather a little bit at a time. Each side, was to repersent diffrent sides of the force, Light and Dark sides. Then the words that appered. maybe they repersented the problems with both the dark side and light side of the force? Maybe, to be a real jedi, you had to know, both sides of the force. In the dream everytime he saw himself leaned tward a side, he would feel pain. Maybe the force was trying to tell him something. So many questions....
So many questions, so little time, for the rest of the night, Weexe would lay and think about the dream. He wanted to know, what did it mean. Was there even a purpose to it?
Finish-Fan Fiction number 1
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