It was the middle of the night, it was a dark night, dark like a black mans cape. Every one was asleep, every thing was silent, but a blaster shot cracked the sky open, the silences was killed, screams where heard, Renek jumped out of bed, and ran to the window, the moonlight shone over his well keeped body, light went on outside. Renek grabbed his robe and put it on in a hurry, he also grabbed his lightsaber and hurried out the room. He stopped to see his master talking to a few jedi, Lyn Korak his master turn to Renek, who in respect bowed.
"Hello Renek"
"Hello master"
"We where just talking about what just happened, this youngling saw the person who shot the bullet, carry on."
Lyn turned to a youngling.
"Um the person was tall i didnt see it's face but it was wearing black all over."
"Good work youngling you may go back to bed." Lyn complimented.
And with that the youngling ran back to his room.
"Well, the jedi council will decide what will happen."
And every one whent back to bed.
Lyn Korak
IMO the descrioption is alright. Maybe a bit more. Other than that, its good. Are you going to write more because that could, in a sense, be the end? Please answer. Otherwise, good work Padawan. Ill post it in your assignments.
