RainaRose
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TearsI see you in my tears
And in my own reflection
I hear you in the wind that passes through me
I feel you in my hunger
Your haunting my ambitions
Beautifully distructive attraction
Climb to 0 g's
Now falling like a Rock
Drug and digitized inside a dream
And you are for me
A lie so set so sweet
And in your tears of yourself
I see
That you are the one
Whom I fall
And live in this end
In a velveteen equation
I feel you in my fears
And in my fascination
I taste you in safe water and it drowns me
Paranoid and Peaceful
Inside a sweet addiction
Velveeten electric attraction
Soft insanity
And I can't make it stop
Another lost naton in a dream
And this is the call
Summon on the tears
In this Velveteen equation
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Crozeus
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Aww.
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Darth Thilus
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wAw o.o
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Sirak Sazen
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w00t! Pretty poem, Raina. I shouldn't..... I have to. The best conversation in Call of Duty history.
McCullan: "I'm McCullan. Two rules. Rule number one: You're no good to me dead. Rule number two: Ahh who cares. You'll all end up dead anyways." *walks away*
Huxley: "That was sure inspiring."
Dixon: "You want inspiration, Huxley? Read a poem... Okay. Today we're on a secret mission to get coffee and doughnuts. Only problem is that the Germans drank all the coffee and ate all the doughnuts, so now we've gotta go kick theirs butts.... And guys, try to remember rule number 1."
Couldn't resist. 
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Crozeus
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And remember what happens at the end?
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RainaRose
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Thanks. I just...gots depressed and had to write it without comments on it. Wanted to see how that went.
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Sirak Sazen
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Emotion makes the best poetry.
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RainaRose
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Emiton my Dear Friend, is what poetry is all about. Its the contents of the soul. I want to be a writer, when I get older you know.
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Crozeus
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I'm already a writer 
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RainaRose
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A professional writer?
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Xander Vos
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I'd like to consider myself a writer too. Haven't written much but my ultimate dream would be able to write as a proffesional writer. If I make it big time I'll be sure to give you guys a shout as being the lucky few to have read my first few attempts. 
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RainaRose
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Well, I haven't got anything published yet but I am going to enter some contests and try to win the gold. I am going to be a professional writer without a doubt. I love writing with this passion and I never get bored of it. 
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Crozeus
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Not professional, but I've had a work of mine approved for publishing.
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RainaRose
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o.O Wow congrats. I can't wai to get some of my stuff published.
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Crozeus
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It's good to go in young as they are like "ooh, young writers that'll make us popular"
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RainaRose
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Yup, pretty much. Especially if the story is a really good one.
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