Cael Ordin
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Shades of Grey Discussion(Any Thoughts or contructive Criticism would be accepted in this discussion board. Thank You.)
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Lyn Korak
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It's good, but is that the introduction, or one chapter?
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Xander Vos
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You should check out our time line and revise that. If its in the years following the Emperor's death, I've barely arrived at the Temple myself, and Lanik is still a young man in the Kroprulan Empire.
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Cael Ordin
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Thanks and Its the introduction not a chapter. I'm writing the chapters at home they will take a while to rite because I'm busy all the time.
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