Search for the Past Revised Version

Lord Lanik · Search for the Past Revised Version

((Ok I'm gona be redoing Search for the Past and renaming it, I'm gona need some characters for it so if you are intrested just PM me))

Characters:
Lord Lanik: Supreme Overlord of the Order of the Corrupt- Human Male
Empress Saber: Empress of the Sith on Koprulu- Human Female
Abba: Leader of the Jedi- Human female
Darth Karnus Scorn Star: Shaman and Third in Command of Lanik’s Empire- Human male
Darth Ollander: Supreme Commander of the Order of the Corrupt- Clawdite Male
Darth Quiten: Captain of Lanik’s bodyguard and Grand General - Human male
Koras: Jedi Council Member-Tugruta male
Vikro: Jedi Council Member- Human male
Shatterpoint: Jedi Council Member- Human female
Stap Magnus Praxeum: First-class Prophet of the Dark Side - Human Male
Doran Vexen: Sith General-Human male

Lord Lanik

((DOUBLE POST!))
The Search for the Past

PRELUDE
Zian, Zian System, Wild Space
Zian was a desolate planet, covered with deserts and vast wastes. Subject to numerous attacks from neighboring planets, it was all but forgotten by the Jedi Order. A man stood, with his eyes closed. He was wearing the robes of a Sith Lord. He was about 6’4” with dark brown hair that hung to his shoulders. There was a small scar on his right cheek that looked like a viroblade wound. A single bladed lightsaber hung from his belt. A man was kneeling at his feet.

“Lord Lanik,” the man said trembling. He was terrified about talking to Lanik

The man called Lanik moved slightly and his eyes popped open. They were bright yellow.

“I’m sorry to disturb your meditation, but a team of Jedi has gotten past the fleet.”

Bakura
The Room of the Fallen Jedi was one of the most peaceful places in the galaxy. Exotic plants grew and the fountains and waterfalls were always bubbling. Memorials for Jedi that died in the wars with the Sith were scattered around. Sitting on a bench in the most secluded part, sat the Jedi Council member, Abba meditating. She was 35 with brown hair and serious green eyes.
She was thinking about the Jedi team that the Council had sent to investigate the Zian System. The Republic had lost contact with it and the surrounding area. She felt the Jedi teams waves pulse with the Force, but suddenly their waves were overwhelmed with a darkness greater than any she’d ever felt, but it also felt familiar. She felt this be

Lord Vexen

so when will the next chapter air?