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| Dakoth |
mccdt68's AssignmentsAssignment #1..Report here. Hard, I know. |
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| Io Lee |
reporting in | ||||
| Dakoth |
yay!
Ok time for your first real assignment: Pretty standard fare, I'd like you to write me up your character's bio, complete with saber form, backstory, and reasons for being a Jedi. |
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| Io Lee |
Name: Io Lee
Race: Human Basic Description:Tall about 6'7, brown hair, muscular, blue eyes, 45, male, skin color white, calm, kind to every dose not belive in violence but will fight with anyone if pushed Job/Class: exiled jedi, leaning towards the light light saber form: vaapad Equipment: Old double bladded light saber Hasn't been activated ever since the end of the clone wars, Green, two blaster pistols, vibroblade, old jedi robs, and Heavy Zabrrak armor Ship : The Hornet, dual engine, 2 main blaster cannons located on the side, 3 mini blaster canons located around the ship, transport ship one escape pod. cockpit located on the top but in the back of the ship, same size as the Ebon Hawk, hyper dirve can malfunction at some times. Additional Biography: Masterd force at young age, amazing piloting skills (not better than Anakin Skywalker though) Faught on Isis during the clone wars nearly escaped Isis when the clones attacked him. Almost fell to the dark side when he fled to telos. Consiserd himself an outkast of the jedi order. He was traind first at the telos acadamy. Abillites: Lost light saber skills 4 years after the clone wars. good pilot skills, terrible sniping skils, xcilent heavy blaster and mele skills. Can handle any tipe of sword and blaster, high wisdome The reason he wanted to join the jedi again is because he saw what the empire was doing to taris so he wanted stop them from hurting his home world like the sith did in the jedi clivil war (sorry about the spelling if i spelled anything wrong) |
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| Xander Vos |
You can't use Vapaad. Only Masters can, and only very experienced Masters at that. You're a puny Padawan. You shouldn't even know basic forms yet, still be learning them.
Sorry, I just like messing with you. 
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| Io Lee |
just because i chose dakoth to be my master |
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| Mindal |
All he was doing was pointing out that a padawan could never use such a form because this particular form is the most demanding and difficult form of all and requires a lot of skill along with the mastery of other forms. The style requires you to enjoy the fight which in turn brings you very close to the darkside and it's a bit hard to see a mere padawan overcoming this. |
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| Xander Vos |
I didn't want you as my Padawan. YOU wanted ME as your Master. Excellent reply Mindal. 
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| Dakoth |
Very good mccdt, now for your next mundane assignment before we get into the more substantial stuff.
Now that I know about your character, you should get to know the other characters on the forum. In your own words, give me an outline on the characters of 3 different forum-goes as well as a brief paragraph stating what you like or dislike about this character. Profiles can be found in the "Profile" section. Who'da thunk. |
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| Xander Vos |
Three guesses who he chooses. 
mccdt - remember its IC, so picking apart any OC qualites you dislike about me doesn't work.
(Sorry Dakoth, not meaning to upstage you, just making sure if he takes apart my character that its actually my character and not me.) |
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| Dakoth |
EDIT: Make sure to pick out the OOC flaws of the user to the extreme.
hehhe J/K |
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| Io Lee |
ok xander i'll pick out any thing wrong on ur character profile |
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| Io Lee |
heres one
name: Xander Vos species: human profesion: jedi master gender: female... (lol jkjk) male bio: Xander Vos is the Grand-son of Quinlan Vos, the famed Jedi of the old Republic. After Order 66 was executed, his Grand-Mother, and Xander's father fled, seeking shelter on far off Naboo. There Xander's father grew into an admirable young man, under the false name of Xander Antilles. Soon Xander's father met a striking young woman, to whom he soon married. Unfortunately, the Imperials managed to finally track down Quinlan Vos' family, and managed to kill Xander's grandmother, who gave Xander's father her greatest possession: her loyal blaster with which she had saved Quinlan's life on many an occasion. Fleeing to nearby Tatooine, Xander's father, now resuming his original name, Korto Vos, took up the life of moisture farming, which he would do for the rest of his life. Xander's mother grew pregnant, and they decided to name the unborn child Xander, after the man to whom Xander's mother had fallen in love. After the Emperor was killed at Endor, Xander a now young man of 10, saught out the remains of the Jedi, on Bakura, fulfilling Quinlan's aim. Before leaving home, his father gave him two of their greatest possessions, the blaster Xander's grand-mother had given Xander's father, and Krayt Dragon hide boots. Leaving Tatooine with intent to visit his Grand Mother's grave on Tatooine, Xander was joined by his life-long friend, Jysek Talore, the son of the man who had provided Xander with the X-Wing he used to leave Tatooine. After paying his respects and building his Grand Mother an ornate grave, the two left Naboo under the insistence of local authorities. The two travelled far and wide, their journey ranging from Corellia to Kinyen, where he and Jysek were captured by Black Haven. Finaslly escaping Black Haven six months later, they limped their way to Lorta, where they believed they were safe for the time being. With no warning, an unlucky coincidence sent the Sith Military on an invasion to Lorta, catching the two unaware, and killing Jysek. When Xander awoke with a prosthetic arm, he was greeted by Asil Leikane, Jedi Master of the Bakuran Order. Sensing the boy's potential Shatterpoint brought him back with her, where he was initiated into the Order. Vikro and Xander went on many a mission together, some ranging from simple missions to surrounding towns on Bakura, or a neighboring world, to the more serious, such as their first mission, which saw them travel to Naboo in the aftermath of a Sith strike. Finally, Xander Vos was Knighted, standing proudly amongst his companions, such as his close friend, Lyn Korak. After training his first Apprentice, Wes Odo, Xander received word that his former Master, Vikro, had been killed on Korriban after a struggle to destroy the Jewel of the Force. The Jewel had been destroyed however, so Xander was content with knowing his Master had acheived his aim. When news filtered through that the Jewel had not in fact been destroyed, Xander, along with Koras Aldamar, Padme Dral, Lyn Korak travelled to Korriban, where he found his Master alive but corrupted by the Dark Side. After an ensuing struggle Xander was corrupted into Darth Cious, and Darth Vicarious reverted into Vikro. Darth Cious and Lyn Korak showed down in an epic duel, from which the Jewel was completely obliterrated from a strike of Force Lightning which hit it, freeing Xander from its spell. The pair, leaving the Temple, returned to the Temple in Lyn's ship. Koras, Vikro and Padme met them back at the Temple, and all were relieved to have returned in one piece. Xander Vos finally acheived the rank of Jedi Master when he was more then fifty years old, much later then most, though that was due to his short temper, and his Dark Side genes, inherited from his Grand Father. When the Sith Empire was struck by a severe blow by an unseen enemy to the Jedi, the Council seized the oppurtunity, sending one of its leading members, Xander Vos, thirty years after he was made a Master, to attack the Sith. The peace between the Jedi and the Sith, initiated by the now dead Asil and Abba was broken. Apparently it had been a trick, as Commander Minous' fleet, accompanied by several others, jumped out of Hyperspace, effecively trapping Xander Vos' force. Xander Vos and Commander Minious' craft fired upon each other, both becoming severely damaged. Minutes before his craft was destroyed, Xander Vos left in a shuttle, covered by fire from his other craft, and entered Commander Minious' command ship. The two showed down in a fierce duel, where harsh words were exchanged, and Xander Vos' Dark past was evoked, sending him dangerously close to the Dark Side and a life with the Sith. Finally, in a moment of serenity, he allowed the scornful Commander Minious to strike him down, allowing himself to become one with the Force and join his Grand father in the never realms of the Force. Commander Minious, quickly refocussing his aim, utterly obliterated Xander Vos' fleet. what i learned: That xander is an annoyong dufus...(lol jk jk i just like messing with him) That xander lost his arm like anakin skywalker and replaced with an mechanical are ( that had to be the coolest out of the hole thing) what i found wrong: to descriptive advice: dont give to much info cuz it will bore people like me |
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| Dakoth |
Fair enough. Thats one down, two to go. | ||||
| Io Lee |
Name: Mindal Reynolt
Species: Human Age: 16 Gender: Male Hair: Black hair pulled back into small ponytail Eyes: Dark Green Height: 6'0 Build: Muscular Home Planet: Bunduki Bio:Mindal grew up on Talus, although being born on Bunduki. At the young age of three his uncle took him with him to Talus. Growing up he was a quiet kid who kept to himself. He was always found either helping his uncle in his bakery in Dearic or in the vast private library. Mindal spent countless hours in the library reading about everything. From outer rim planets to stories of heroes and jedis, doing so has made him very intelligent. Behind the scenes not many people knew about was that Mindal's uncle was a Follower of Palawa and in being so was a Teri Kasi Master. His uncle trained him in the ways of Teri Kasi. He excelled at the art unknowingly that the force played a role in it, along with learning other things quickly. One day while working in his uncle's bakery a grey jedi by the name of Xander Vos had come in. Not knowing who he was Mindal continued to work continuing to eye the mysterious man who had been in the place for hours. After everyone had left and they were about to close the unknown jedi approached his uncle. After a bit of talking they then talked to Mindal about how the jedi sensed he was force sensitive and would send him to the Jedi Academy if he so wished. Days later he had arrived at the Jedi Temple to begin his training as the apprentice of Xander Vos. what i found interesting: that he spends alot of time at the library. what was good about it: was short and did not bore me what i found wrong: nothing |
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| Io Lee |
Sith Name: Darth Matas
Birth Name: Kadrian Kolar((He shed his name when he recieved his Darth title)- Grandnephew of late Jedi, Agen Kolar. Date of Birth: 50 A.B.Y. Date of Death: 170 A.B.Y Age: 22 Homeworld: Iridonia Species: Zabrak Gender: Male Skin color: Red Height: 1.70 meters Weight: 160 lbs Eye color: Black Hair: Black buzzcut bio On 50 ABY, Kadrian Kolar was born to Zan Kolar, a Zabrak Bounty Hunter, and Mika Kolar, a retired Zabrak Smuggler on Iridonia. The very same year he was born, the Iridonian Civil War began. Kadrian had an older sister named Corra Kolar, and a younger brother named Alo Kolar. The Kolar clan had to survive through the violent war for many years. They had to see the brutality of the war and the warlike nature of their own species. The War raged on with no stop to it. The Southern clans had secretly hired Mandalorians to help them out in the war and the Mandalorians decided to take advantage of the offer. The Mandalorians helped the south, but they also wanted to take Zabrak specimen back to the Mandalore sector. On 57 ABY, the homestead of the Kolar clan was destroyed and they were attacked by the South Clans. They were almost killed if not for the help of a Zabrak Jedi that kbacked the army off and took Kadrian and his clan to a secret Jedi Academy on Iridonia. There Kadrian was found to have a high midichlorian count and force sensitive. The Jedi there thought he could be trained as a Jedi but they needed permission from the Bakuran Jedi Council to do so. The problem was that the War did not permit any ships except Mandalorian to enter or leave Iridonia. The Jedi decided open Kadrian up to the force and they did. They began to show him force techniques and how to manipulate it. The Jedi also found a hidden darkness within him, and they tried to teach him to control it, but it would seem Kadrian did not listen. Kadrian's brother and sister were also found to be force sensitive and because of Kadrian's secret training, they learned some about the force as well. Kadrian learned the basic force skills early in his "training" and he was found to have a strong telekinetic ability wghen he was seen lifting three Reek infants at once. Kadrian didn't really learn the ways of the Jedi but only of the force and the ability to duel. His life towards the Jedi would be disrupted when the war would get in the way. Kadrian's father, Zan Kolar, had arrived from a Bounty mission to find the Southern soldiers with Mandalorians in front of the Academy. A battle eurupted after that which ended with Zan Kolar stabbed and further pushing Kadrian towards the Dark Side of the Force. His subconsious hatred for Mandalorians would star soon after that. In the scurry, the Jedi Academy was destroyed and most of the Jedi were killed. Kadrian ended up being kidnapped by the Mandalorians and taken to their ship. He was from there, shipped to the planet Mandalore. His life on Mandalore was brutal, difficult, and scarring. Kadrian was one of the few beings in the galaxy that had to be subjected to slavery. The Zabrak was kept as a slave on Mandalore and used to work for a Mandalorian Commander. With every day, his hatred towards the Mandalorians would grow. Kadrian was forced to fight and kill in what were called Tal Kyr'am which in basic meant blood death which were slave fights for the entertainment of the Mandalorians. Kadrian was taught how to efficiantly kill others and he was one of the best Tal Kyr'am fighters. His force moves and natural Iridonian instincts caused Kadrian to indirectly train in the force. He was taught basic moves of Teräs Käsi to help him fight better and entertain the Mando'ade. He continued a slave for many years after until he was strong enough. One day, Kadrian took the initiative and managed to somehow out wit his Mandalorian owner and killed him. His Dark Sided presence was strong now and with his constant uses of force powers in the Tal Kry'am, he had knowledge in the force. He stole a Mandalorian ship and left the planet. He did not know of space travel so he simply pressed buttuons and then went into hyperspace blindly with big risks. He ended successfully arriving to Taris. Although the planet still had scars from the Jedi Civil War, it was rebuilt and had many of the same events as thousands of years ago. There, Kadrian became a Taris Duelist even though the former dueling ring had been destroyed thousands of years before. He dueled because that was the only thing he could do and he was very good at it. He had to earn credits since he crash landed on Taris and had no money to buy a ship. The killing rule of duels was restablished and Kadrian killed without hesitation. He grew more towards the Dark Side of the Force. When he had enough credits to buy a ship he left the planet but once again, he did not know about coordinates so he simply pressed buttons and went blindly, again, into hyperspace. He crash landed on Kroprulu. what i learned: that matas was trained by the jedi during the war |
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| Dakoth |
You've got the basics there, but I'd like you to go back and elaborate a bit on things before you go on to your next assignment 
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| Xander Vos |
Cut it out NOW. You're complaining for me giving to much information? Because it bores you? What is your problem?!?!?! What did I do to you??? |
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| Io Lee |
ok im lost "elaborate" what do u mean by that |
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| Dakoth |
Simply add a few more details to your stuff talking about the profiles. Nothing too big
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| Io Lee |
ok for matas i also like how he showed the time periode he lived in
i should do that to my character for xander even though it was too descriptive he had a time line of important events in his life which was good for mindal it was good that had gave basic details but should have added more details like if he had any wepons, armor, if he had a ship, before joining the jedi ( im not sure if thats all u wanted or if i did that right if not then ill add on |
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| Lyn Korak |
Lol, just saying, that I think I got more than Alex. | ||||
| Io Lee |
lol | ||||
| Dakoth |
Ok! there you go! very good!
now for the next assignment, which will to be to put together everything you've learned so far
I want you to supplement your own profile, keeping in mind the suggestions that you had provided for other people's. That way everyone benifits
Good luck! |
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| Io Lee |
what i learned is that do not put too much stuff in your profile but still be descriptive, also don't keep it short too because people will think ur charcter is boring.
its good to keep a time line of important events that happend in his or her life because it'll keep the reader interested also i think you should put down what he/she carries with him like an blaster sword ect. before they joined the jedi order if u want more than thats fine with me |
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| Dakoth |
That'll be enough Now add a timeline of important events to your own profile
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| Io Lee |
ok i dont know what the time periods are so i'll tyr to be specific
about the time anakin skywalker was born Io Lee was born on the planet Telos when he turned about 4 the sith saw that he was force sensitive and took him and tried to train to be a sith but he escaped on the world of tatooine. There he stowed on a ship that was heading to corecant about when he was about to turn 5 yoda saw Io lee wondering around the jedi tempale ans accepted him into jedi training a when he turned about 10 he was one of the best students in years mastering the vaapa form at a young age by 18 he was knighted by his outstanding preformance at the first sight of the clone wars when the clone wars were going on Io Lee was asked to lead an army to Isis. near the end his clones attacked him in the palace so the beast riders helped him escape. by the time when the completeion of the death near he lost his connection to the force and fled to telos There he became the general fo telos he went into a war with Isis because he was accused of murding there king during the clone wars later the jedi helped setle the conflict beetween Isis after the first destruction of the death star Master Dakoth saw that Io Lee was force sensitve so he asked the council if he can train him to be continued... |
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| Dakoth |
I like it! Its pretty interesting how your character lost his connection with the force and went on to lead an alternate life.
Your next assignment tomorrow... |
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| Io Lee |
sweet, i wont be on feb 2-3 cuz of an b-ball tourny and maybe not tomorrow cuz its my b-day | ||||
| Io Lee |
reporting in for my next assignment master | ||||
| Dakoth |
There are some minute details I have to work out. Twiddle your thumbs in the meantime 
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| Io Lee |
ok i'll do that.... dang this tires my thumbs | ||||
| Xander Vos |
I know you'll love this - I have been given control of your next assignment courtesty of Dakoth.
I want you to write me a five hundred word essay on your faveourite EU character, and then, seperate from the five hundred word essay, explain in as much detail as possible why they are your favourite character. |
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| Dakoth |
He's not kidding
I figure we can't have fellow Jedi at eachother's throats, so take this oppurtunity to "kiss and make up."
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| Xander Vos |
Without the kissing bit. | ||||
| Io Lee |
500!!! this could take a while to think about | ||||
| Dakoth |
It sounds harder than it really is to write 500 words. good luck though | ||||
| Io Lee |
My favorite EU character is... crap i cant think of anything i like eu but i can't think of anyone i like | ||||
| Lord Vexen |
(if this shouldn't be here then delete it.)
A tip. Xander loves essays. My advice use the Yuuzhan Vong. |
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| Darth Samuel |
these aren't your assignments. its his favorite, not yours, dipstick. lol, jk |
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| Lord Vexen |
(true. Or you can write the essay on Quinlan Vos | ||||
| Darth Samuel |
Vexen is living proof of why the Sith military sucks. |
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| Lyn Korak |
*Laughs.* He got you there. | ||||
| Io Lee |
ok i'll try it now
my favorite EU character is Jolee Bindo. An eccentric former smuggler and skilled Jedi, Jolee Bindo chose to retreat from society and live out his days in seclusion and obscurity, four thousand years before the Galactic Civil War. Bindo cloaked himself in indifference to hide his sorrow. He appeared as a cantankerous old man who readily dismissed the wide world and its troubles with an impatient wave of his hand, but his care and wisdom still shone through the many layers he had draped around his heart. His story remains unknown aside from rumors that he fought in the great war of Exar Kun -- in a time when Jedi turned against Jedi and the dark side threatened to swallow the galaxy. It is not known what happened that pushed Jolee to leave the Jedi order, to leave civilization itself and go into self-imposed exile in the deepest shadows of wild Kashyyyk. Jolee remained tight-lipped and scoffed at any suggestion that he might be something more than what he appears: an old man. But his skills were apparent, and when Bastila Shan's mission to uncover the Star Forge caused Republic agents to cross paths with Jolee in the Kashyyyk shadowlands, he was willing to finally return to the galaxy at large. Jolee accompanied the quest for Darth Malak, traveling to distant worlds such as Manaan, where he uncovered elements of his forgotten past -- like his friend and fellow war hero Sunry, who was held captive for murder on the watery world. Despite a series of rousing adventures among spirited youngsters, Jolee remained weary of the galaxy's endless, pointless struggles. He insisted that all he wanted was peace, but his eyes -- the eyes of a fighter, the eyes of a Jedi -- told a different story. why he is my favorite character is because he is pretty funny in the game but other than that he is wise and intellegent like obi-wan (obi-wan is my favorite movie character) |
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| The Chosen One |
Copy and paste does not replace thinking.
-JaSK Heh. |
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| Io Lee |
hey that put alot thought into lol ok ok i just did that to see if anyone would catch on ok umm
My favorite Eu character is Exar Kun. Exar Kun was a padawan of the revered Jedi master Vodo-Siosk Baas. Like the dark apprentices that would follow throughout history, a basic impatience undermined all of Kun's training. Kun left his master and traviled to the world of Onderon. There he encounterd the spirit on Freedon Nadd an acient sith who gave him further instruction. Kun traviled to the world of Korriban where his body got crushed in a cave-in. He tried to call apon the force but nothing happend. The dark side gave him what the force couldn't. By giving in to fear and rage he was able to heal himself and clear the debree, he came out of the caves transformed and fueled by the darkside. Kun came to the long forgotten sith temples on Yavin IV. There he took an apprentice named Ulic Qel-Droma.The two unleashed a scourge that would forever scar a galaxy. Kun and Qel-Droma were able to recruit more Jedi into their ranks. Many young Jedi turned against their masters and slew them. Kun invented the sith lightsaber. We call it an double bladded light saber but it was mainly a sith lightsaber. A joint Republic and Jedi taskforce came to Yavin 4 to capture Exar Kun. He knew he could not survive the attack, so he summoned his dark side energies and trapped his consciousness into the temples his Massassi warriors had built for him. For four millennia, Kun's disembodied spirit slumbered. The presence of a dozen Force-sensitives stirred his consciousness. It was now several years after the Battle of Endor, and Jedi Master Luke Skywalker had begun training Jedi at an academy on Yavin 4. Exar Kun's spirit sought to corrupt Skywalker's students and bring about a dark side reign again. He controlled Luke's most powerful student, Kyp Durron, but in the end, Luke's students united and were able to finally dispel Kun's spirit. he is my favorite character because he is an good example what the dark side can do to someone who turns. Also i like him because he invinted the double bladed light saber |
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| Lyn Korak |
Cheating isn't good... | ||||
| Io Lee |
bull i did not all thats from memory | ||||
| Lyn Korak |
Just putting it out there. Okay, I'm done in this topic, mcctdcctdctddtc. |
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| Io Lee |
lol maybe i should have it changed | ||||
| The Chosen One |
I wouldn't call it "cheating", but atleast put some of your own thought into it.
I don't even understand why you guys make the Padawans write essays though. This isn't school, and that is a bit tedious and unnecessary. You get promoted even without a Master on this site, and that's one of the reasons I never asked for a master. Didn't want to write any essays if I didn't have to. :p |
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| Xander Vos |
TCO, is it your Padawan? No. With yours you can do what you want. I prefer to give them essays and the like because it builds on their creative skills - needed for RPing and FF writing - and it helps improve their grammar, which is important. | ||||
| Io Lee |
thats a good reason xander | ||||
| Io Lee |
is that good xander??? | ||||
| Io Lee |
geez did xander even look at it ohh well dakoth can u accept it cuz i'm board out of my mind please | ||||
| Dakoth |
Its out of my hands PM Xander about it.
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| Xander Vos |
Youch, a triple post. Naughty naughty. 
Yeah I looked at it, I didn't realise I needed to approve it, but... approved. Good job. |
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| Io Lee |
thanks, so whats my next assingment master dakoth if u have one | ||||
| Dakoth |
Oh, I have one for you all right. Your next assignment will be to give an assignment out to Xander Vos. After all, the goodwill should go both ways, eh?
hehehe an actual assignment for you tomorrow. Bonus points if you somehow manage to pull the one I gave you off. |
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| Xander Vos |
Oh you are cruel Dakoth.
Ok, lets here it, what's my assignment? I'll see if I want to do it.
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| Lyn Korak |
Tell me off as well, then. I accused him of Cheating. |
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| Xander Vos |
You weren't questioning the methods of teaching, but the source of his assignment. | ||||
| Io Lee |
ok i want you to type a 50,000 word esay on ur favorite Eu character..... na jk ok the assinment is to write an 250 to 500 word esay on your favorite star wars movie character | ||||
| Io Lee |
ok dakoth should we wait 'till xander replys cuz u said my next assignment will be today | ||||
| Dakoth |
sure
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| Io Lee |
ok cool | ||||
| Lyn Korak |
Come on, Alex. I want you to do your assignment. | ||||
| Xander Vos |
Very well. Luke Skywalker was a young, idealistic moisture farmer all his life. When he witnessed a space battle above his meek home, he rushed to tell his friends, although by the time they looked for it, the battle was over. What had seemed to Luke to be Imperials fighting pirates was really a crucial moment in the Rebellions history, for during the battle the Tantive IV, carrying C-3PO, R2-D2 and Leia Organa fell into the Empire's clutches, and R2-D2 was given the plans to the Death Star and jettisoned - along with C-3PO to the surface of the planet, in a hope that they would come into contact with Jedi Master of old Obi-Wan Kenobi. Luke managed through the luck of the Force to end up with the two droids, and what ensued was a series of misadventures that ended in the discovery that Obi-Wan, whom Luke had merely thought of as a crazed old hermit, was a Jedi Master, and that they needed to meet with Bail Organa on Alderaan to aid the Rebellion in its plight against the Empire. Luke then met such allies as Han Solo who aided him in getting to Alderaan, and Chewbacca, Han Solo's co-pilot. Reaching Alderaan's system, they found it destroyed by the Death Star. Luke then boarded the Death Star with the others to rescue Princess Leia, who had been captured aboard. After rescuing her, Luke was tortured by the image of Obi-Wan being struck down by Darth Vader, the Emperor's henchman. Fleeing to Yavin IV, home of the Rebel base, Luke geared up to take on the Death Star, getting off a lucky shot and destroying the entire station. Moving from world to world the Rebels finally settled on the ice world of Hoth, where Luke aided the Rebellion in stopping an invasion of the Imperials, although it was in vain, the Rebels fleeing the world in disrepair. Receiving a message from Obi-Wan Kenobi through the Force Luke went to Dagobah, where he learnt much from Jedi Master Yoda. He learnt so much that he left Dagobah to meet Darth Vader head on in battle. Unfortunately his confidence was unfounded, and he lost his left hand to the Dark Lord, and was rescued by Lando Calrissian, a friend of Han Solo who had been forced to encase Han in carbonite. Together with Chewbacca and Leia, the four then rescued Han from Jabba the Hutt, and Luke returned to Yoda to find him on his death-bed, where it was revealed that Luke had a sister, who he quickly figured out to be Leia, with help form Obi-Wan's ghost. Meeting the Empire head on on Endor to destroy the second Death Star, Luke was captured by Darth Vader and was forced to watch as the Rebel fleet engaged the Imperials, whilst on Endor's suface Leia and Han fought their way into the shield generator, destroying it and allowing the Rebel fleet to attack. Luke was urged on by Palpatine, also known as Darth Sidious, to attack Darth Vader, who Luke learnt was his father from Yoda. The two duelled, and Luke won out, forcing Vader to the ground. Just as he gave up the battle, realising what he had become, Sidious unleashed his feared Force Storm, pushing Luke to the ground, only to be rescued in the unlikely ally of vader, who threw Sidious down the main reactor. Thousands of meters below Wedge Antilles and Lando Calrissian fired the blasts that would mortally-wound the Death Star. Fleeing the dying station with his father, Luke gave him a heroes funeral on Endor where he was reunited with Leia and Han, who had fallen in love, and the rest of his Rebellion friends. Luke then went on to re-establish the Jedi Order, marry Mara Jade, a woman who had begun as an assasin sent to kill him and ended as a Jedi Master and wife of Luke Skywalker. The pair had a son, Ben Skywalker, who begun training under Jacen Solo, Leia and Han's son. Their daughter, Jaina also became a Jedi Knight, and the two families lived in peace. Until the Corellian Conflict. Good enough? |
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| Io Lee |
wow a lot of stuff i learned ya good enough
whats my next assingment |
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| Dakoth |
Ok! Its time to see how you can RP! Start up a duel thread and challenge another member to a friendly duel. I'll moderate it
GL! |
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| Io Lee |
good luck theres no such thing as luck theres only the force | ||||
| Dakoth |
I meant "George Lucas" silly! | ||||
| Io Lee |
what dose george lucas have to do with anything | ||||
| Xander Vos |
Its a joke... -_- | ||||
| Dakoth |
Did you two n00bs finish your duel yet? | ||||
| Io Lee |
no because xander hasent respond yet | ||||
| Dakoth |
bah, go smack him for me! | ||||
| Io Lee |
just give me directions and i will
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| Dakoth |
step 1. Open a PM to Xander
step 2. Write *Slap* Dakoth said finish our duel n00b! step 3. send PM |
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| Io Lee |
sweet thanks but he replied (finally) | ||||
| Dakoth |
The threat of a slap gets them every time
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| Io Lee |
true true now all i need is a pimp cane!!!!!!!!!!!!!LOL jkjk
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| Dakoth |
Heh, I was just watching a movie where a grandfather pulls out a cane against some crazy jacked guy, and when the guy tries to take the cane from the grandpa, he grabs the end and pulls.. and it turns out that it was a freakin' sword cane and he just unsheathed it. I laughed so hard. Suppose you had to be there. | ||||
| Io Lee |
ya dude in saints row you can get a pimp can and its a shot gun instead its preety sweet | ||||
| Dakoth |
heh.. that gets me thinking, I'm totally giving you a lightsaber Pimp-Cane when you get made Knight. | ||||
| Io Lee |
sweetness that would be cool if someone in the movies had a lightsaber pimp-cane that would be sweet when vader says "i am your father" then luke pulls out his cane and stabs it through him | ||||
| Dakoth |
Grats on your first finished duel!
Now, evaluate your performance and tell me what you think you did wrong, where your biggest strenghths were and why Xander was definitley using steroids or something. |
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| Io Lee |
i think i need to work on every thing since it was my first rp. I think my strength was not giving up. I also think Xander likes to hit people in the chin area. And he was using steriods because he had extreamly fast reflexes | ||||
| Dakoth |
Ok, fair enough. Now that you've analyzed your own duel, read 3 other duel threads, and analyze them to get a feel for the deuling styles of other board members. Report your findings here.
If you're having trouble, heres a few duels. Dakoth vs Lyn Korak Minous vs Praxeum Koras vs Empress Saber Obi-Tyler vs Grand Master Abba Duel to the death 0.o Xander vs Dakoth |
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| Io Lee |
Xander vs Dakoth: that was the most interesting duel i read so far. it actually made a picture in my head. when me and xander were fighting i should have used the force.
are you a jedi guardian?? because you seemed to attack more than what a consular or sentinel would. xander uses defense more there than in my duel Lyn vs Dakoth: that was a very strange but funny battle i dont know if i have anything to say about that battle all you did was hit 'em with a stick and he threw a rock at you well except the part when he was trying to punch your face in well there's 2 |
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| Dakoth |
Great, only one more Keep up the good work.
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| Io Lee |
obi tyler vs jedi abba:
this match was confusing i got lost so it looks like obi-tyler was using an attacking form and jedi abba was using an defensive stance |
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| Dork of Mordork |
Was the "are you a guardian??" question to me? Cause if it was, yeah Koras is a Guardian. | ||||
| Io Lee |
No it was to dakoth | ||||
| Dakoth |
I think I was a sentinel, just because it was the most balanced. | ||||
| Dork of Mordork |
Oh so he must have ignored my duel.
You needs to give yer Paddie smarts like I has. Tells him to reads my duel, jah. |
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| Dakoth |
lol, he forgot his biography of the great DoM at home 
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| Dork of Mordork |
His haxor dog prolly ate it. Again.
But we're getting off-topic. This isn't about haxor dogs... erm yeah. |
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| Dakoth |
Or is it?! | ||||
| Io Lee |
no lets continue ON TOPIC | ||||