Crimsion Red and Knights

RainaRose · Crimsion Red and Knights

So I am going to start and actual, fully born and bread own personal story! Yay for me!

The characters in the story are going to be based off my friends on Rebels and the encounters with people I've had on here.

In order to this though I need permission.

I've got a list of names of the people who I am wanting to use in my book. I need every one on the lists full cooperation if possible.

Here is the list.

Jedi
Rive
Butler_Swan
Dakoth
Xander Vos (Xander for a reason)
Io Lee
Adenn
princessleia
Jiub
Siark Sazen
Jianna
Talen D'aar
Leon Danex

Sith
Lord Invictus
Lord Embion
Darth Thilus
Dath Splinter
Crozeus
Darth Fectum
Darth Samuel
Lord Vexen

I need two things to make this work because I am trying to base this off of your relationship to me through the fourm, how you act with others in the forum, and what your posts are like. In other words I am basing this off of your actual personality, not the characters.

So first thing I need is permission. If you wouldn't mind or do mind, me using your Character just say so and I will respect what you want.

If I am given permission I want a discription of your choice. It can be what you really look like, or not. None of that matters but I want every one to have a fair say in what goes.

Discription should look like this...

Hair:
(color):
(style):
Eyes:
Height:
Skin (color):

Scars, piercings, tattoos, birthmarks:

Allies:

Enimes:

Neutral to:

Loyalty to Group:
(deathly very loyal little almost on the other side)

Other than that if there is anything additional that you would like to add to your character feel free to put it at the bottom and please try to be reasonable

Rediker

You have my permission.

Mr. Green

Rive Caedo

If you're planning to do this for commercial purposes: No such permission given.
If you're planning to do this for personal purposes: Do whatever you want.

RainaRose

I am doing this for personal purpose I guess you could say. I love writing, I love rebels, they go hand in hand.

Oh, them make up something if you wouldn't mind for the rest of it please. That way, your still apart of the story.

Rediker, mind if I ask excactly what you are? But I have place for you already in my story. lol.

Rediker

Male Miraluka with a severely, grossly scarred head and face that I keep wrapped in gauze. I wear red armor and a hood. Well, here. I'll just post the picture.

I serve the Living Force as opposed to the Unifying Force. Excellent healing abilities though I refuse to heal my own scars. They serve as a reminder.

Oh yeah, I'm a Jedi. Razz

Rive Caedo

Rediker

Adenn

You have meh permission.

Hair
(color):Black
(style):Shaggy
Eyes:Black
Height:5"3 Sad

Skin (color):Brown

Scars, piercings, tattoos, birthmarks:Birthmark on my left hand

Allies:
Cool people, like the Jedi.

Enemies:
Uncool people, like the Sith.

Neutral to:
Anybody but Jedi and Sith.

Loyalty to Group:
Little

RainaRose

*Please note that yes I am using the names of the Starwars users here but it will be based upon the personalites I myself have observed while spending my time amongst these players.

Lord Invictus

I approve:

Hair: generally non-visible behind his cloak and mask but....
(color): matte black
(style): semi-long. Perfectly straight. It occasionally seeps through the corners of his mask (what does his mask look like? See: my avatar)
Eyes: glowing white orbs (his race is Miraluka: we are blind)
Height: 5 feet, 5 inches
Skin (color): bleached-white

Scars, piercings, tattoos, birthmarks and/or description:
His skin is utterly perfect and is without any marks. He is EXTREMELY thin (almost to the point of being unhealthy), and he looks, when not wearing a mask, frighteningly cruel, but physically weak. He also wears scarlet and black robes almost all the time, with a hood covering his head. His mask (see: avatar) is terrifying, but it lacks practical usage. He is also a psychotic misanthrope, and he detests all life.

Allies:
Sith

Enemies:
Jedi
Some Sith
All non-Sith living beings

Neutral to:
None. Hates all who don't agree with his extremist ideology, and most who do.

Loyalty to Group:
-To his own extremist Sith Church of the Dark Side: Deathly loyal...
-To the Sith... not really. He is loyal to himself and, secretly, is an usurper wishing to become Dark Lord of the Sith.

Other than that if there is anything additional that you would like to add to your character feel free to put it at the bottom and please try to be reasonable

Invictus is, simply, a madman. He obsesses over himself and despises others. This Dark Lord also exercises his power with any, or no, excuse and extinguishes life for personal satisfaction. Though he is loyal to accomplishing his goals, he doesn't value his own life... at all. Or the life of any being.

RainaRose

...Invictus.....um....all of the people who give me permession will be of the same race. Humonoid, yes, but not humans. They've lived for 2,000 years, same sides under Calls Code.

Lord Invictus

er....

Darth Samuel

You can use mah character.

Adenn

Jiub

Sure, this sounds like a good idea. This character is supposed to be based off of me and how I react to other people on the forum, right?

Hair:
(color): Brown
(style): About medium length, not short, not long.
Eyes: Green
Height: 6'2" (1.89 meters)
Skin (color): Caucasian (White)

Scars, piercings, tattoos, birthmarks: nothing significant

Allies:
I guess that I try to be friends with everyone when possible.

Enimes:
I have probably not agreed with anyone here 100% of the time, but I wouldn't say that I have any real enemies that I'm out to get.

Neutral to:
The very new people that I don't know yet.

Loyalty to Group:
I guess that if I were a character in SW I would be much more deathly loyal to the the Jedi than Kaydros is.

Other than that if there is anything additional that you would like to add to your character feel free to put it at the bottom and please try to be reasonable

Although you will find a number of exceptions, I generally consider myself to be rather laid back and calm. If you are basing this off of my posts you probably already have what you need for the most part. I won't be offended if you portray me a little differently than what I have written. Wink

Talen D'aar

:_( No love?

Xander Vos

Wait is this my character or me? This is me...

Hair:
(color): Brown
(style): A bit wild but not too long
Eyes: Blue
Height: 6'0" (1.83 meters)
Skin (color): Pale

Scars, piercings, tattoos, birthmarks: Small scar above my left eye

Allies:
I try to be as friendly as I can, but do have a habit of making enemies.

Enimes:
Not too many on here I wouldn't think. Possibly Jianna.

Neutral to:
I dunno

Loyalty to Group:
If I was in SW with the Force I'd definately be a Jedi

Lord Invictus

Xander Vos

If you're 5'5" you'd hope you were 13. Wink

RainaRose

Thanks all so much! and Talen D'aar I don't know you all that well. Thanks to all.

Samuel and Xander's fighting will play a big part in my Story, along with the fact that Xander doesn't like Jianna much.

Xander Vos

What fighting? For the umpteempth time, that wasn't a real fight, and everyone seems to know that but you... And me not like Jianna? Confused

I was one of the people defending her...

Adenn

Amg, put me as the kid who got frustrated the bomb didn't detonate so he smashed his keyboard with his face and died from face deformation.

Xander Vos

That's horrible. Shocked

Jiub

Ah, come to think of it maybe Jianna is one person I don't really like at the moment. You will find that a lot of people around here aren't too sad about her being banned though. Rive was actually the one that banned her, I think.

Xander Vos

It was done with a consensus.

RainaRose

I know that it wasn't a real fight lol. I mean that I'm going to put that in my story. You guys playfully hate each other. Wait....Jianna got Ban? I didn't know that. How come?

Xander Vos

Not even playfully... Confused

LOL haven't you seen anything that's happened over the last two weeks? Wink

Jiub

She fought with people a lot. It got out of hand.

Xander Vos

She created a puppet account to come back and flame.

Adenn

I love her. She can have my babies.

Xander Vos

By the way, mind explaining the title Raina?

RainaRose

...I didn't know. She enver caused any problems with me at all and thats most likely why. I mean, I knew she was casing some problems, but not that bad. Huh, funny what you miss when your innocent.

Xander Vos

You don't really get involved in the Debates though, and that's where she really worked her magic.

RainaRose

I do a little but I don't want to cause problems and I'm very opionated.

BTW the title is what I'm calling the two opposite sides. The Sith translated into Crimsion Red and the Jedi into Knights.

Xander Vos

Ah k, makes more sense then.

RainaRose

Yup I just try really hard not to cause problems. I'm sorry that you have to deal with people like that.

Lord Vexen

I say go for it. You have my permission.

RainaRose

Yay! Thank you Vexen, it means a lot!

Darth Splinter

You got my permission.

Hair:
(color): dark brown
(style): medium length, fairly straight
Eyes: green
Height: 5'11(last time I checked)
Skin (color): like a normal white person?

Scars, piercings, tattoos, birthmarks: I have this nastly little burn scar on my right arm that has been there for about a year.

Allies: Erm, Sam? ....Rive....Xander.....the whole sha-bam-bam...Democrats

Enimes: In most debates I would say Invictus, Yoda, and Sirak. Otherwise none....Republicans

Neutral to: Meh...

Loyalty to Group: Loyal beyond the fence, but not crazy loyal like Invictus+Catholic Church.

Sirak Sazen

You have my permission. Very Happy

Hair:
(color): Brown
(style): Wavy
Eyes: Blue
Height: 5'4
Skin (color): White

Scars, piercings, tattoos, birthmarks: Little birthmarks that look like brown dots on my arms and body. Don't ask.... seriously.

Allies: My peeps on Rebels.

Enimes: OpFor (COD4 FTW) and anybody who wants to bring you down or change who somebody is.

Neutral to: Political parties, jocks, and Dr. Pepper.

Loyalty to Group: My family.

RainaRose

Hey who the heck is Darth Malak? An X of mine just messaged me on myspace and his little quote thing said Darth Malak.

Xander Vos

Malak was Revan's Apprentice wasn't he?

If you're X is into Star Wars you should tell him about the site. Wink

RainaRose

True. I will but...he and Leon would KILL each other if that happened.

Xander Vos

Do they know each other?

And Leon isn't here anyway.

RainaRose

No but I wouldn't keep that from Leon when he gets back in about....less than a month. He gets his computer back for AIT.

Xander Vos

Why would he care if someone used to go out with you? One of my friends is going out with one of my X's and I couldn't care less.

Adenn

That's the spirit.

Xander Vos

What's the spirit? Not caring? Razz

Adenn

Indeed, my friend. Indeed.

RainaRose

Its a lot different though. Leon isn't you and he's vehement about who I'm around and who I'm not allowed to be around and who he wants to be around. Thats just how he is.

Xander Vos

Sounds a bit over-protective to me.

RainaRose

Its Leon! Come on.

Xander Vos

Heh, true I guess.

Rive Caedo

Butler_Swan

Name:
-Butler Swan

Species:
-Gryman (New species I made up. Eagle’s wings with Cathar's Body[Like Juhani's]. Also have sharp teeth similar to a cat like creatures in addition to claws on both feet and hands.)

Natural Powers (Ex: Gands breathe ammonia):
-Flight due to large wings
-Supernatrual strength (For Flight)
-Rapid healing, the older you get the faster it is (At the current can heal 50% faster than humans)
-Sharp claws that can cut through a variety of metals and can even cut phrik if strike is used in the right way and it would take a couple hundred hits, but it can cut phrik eventually
-Enhanced vision (both night and day)

Age:
-109

Gender:
-Male

Hair:
-Black

Eyes:
-Brown

Height:
-6'7"

Build:
-Atheletic
-Flexible
-Agile
-Relies more on Stealth than brute Strength

Personality:
-Quite Sarcastic
-Doesn’t like to talk much
-Easily entertained
-Easily annoyed though doesn't show it
-Tired of people too dumb to realize thier smart
-100% Light side

Home Planet:
-Astigrylla (Image Below)

Ship:
-Modified Soro Sub fighter dubbed Swan’s Grace(Destroyed)

-YT-100 Frieghter dubbed Guiding Light

Lightsaber combat style:
-Niman(Mastered)
-Jar Kai’(Mastered)
-Vaapaad(13% Mastered)
-Makashi(55% Mastered)
-Ataru(32% Mastered)
-Trispzest(95% Mastered)

Lightsaber:
-Turqouise and yellow(Both Destroyed in a fight)
-Orange and Yellow(Destroyed in an unknown mission)
-Two Greens:

(Can join to make a double blade)

Equipment:
-Basic Jedi equipment
-DH-17 Blaster
-Numerous Vibro-blades for throwing.

Droid
-R2-Z7 (Destroyed)
-MA-22
-Antma (Human Replica Droid)

Clothing:
-Basic Jedi Tunic, robes, pants etc.
-Brown robe

Rank:
-Jedi Knight

Occupation:
-Jedi

Type of Jedi:
-Jedi Sentinel

Abilities:
-Good pilot
-Vibro blade throwing
-Shuriken Throwing
-Skilled with lightsaber
-Skilled combatant
-Able to hide and supress anger
-Proficient fighter in Teras Kasi

Force powers:
-Force push
-Force pull
-Force jump
-Force persuasion
-etc.

Specialty Force powers:
-Force Deflection(Still Learning)
-Force Absorb(Can only absorb w/ saber)
-Animal Friendship(Mastered)
-Force Projection (Still Learning)
-Electrical Judgement(Mastered)

Former Master:
-Abba

Former Padawan/s:
-Koolon

Current Padawan:
-Devrin

Bio:
-Butler Swan was born in 158 BBY on Astigrylla to well to do parents who lived by trading with smugglers and used mercenaries as body guards. 1 month after Butler Swan was born; a Jedi came to Astigrylla looking for Force Sensitives. The Jedi turned out to be the great Jedi Master Shatterpoint and upon finding Butler, she took him to the Jedi Temple on Bukara to be trained. There he trained under the watchful eye of many Jedi Masters. Eventually, in 143 BBY, Master Abba took Butler Swan as her apprentice. During this time, Abba had to deal with her younger brother Jorrik and didn’t’ have much time to train Butler. However, Butler was self motivated and earned the rank of Jedi Knight in 129 BBY.
In 132 BBY, Butler got an apprentice Koolon, a Kel Dor. He began training him and saw that Koolon was a hard worker and gave him many assignments. He was the first padawan that Butler sucessfully trained.
On numerous occasions, Butler has been known to have "heart attacks" from the things that his fellow jedi in training, Necto, has either said or done...including the human eating rancors and other tall tales. However, Necto later turned Grey.
After this, Butler dissapeared for several months. It was during that time that Butler "rediscovered" his home planet of Astigrylla because while he had been raised from and early age on Correllia, he had been born on Astigrylla though he had not remembered it. It was during a conflict on that planet that he lost both his sabers as well as his prized starfighter.
After a mission protecting a goup of senators, Butler received a Human Replica Droid dubbed "Antma" as a token of thanks. The Human Replica Droid was programmed as a body guard, as a result, Antma is skilled in many martial arts as well as melee and ranged weapons. However, Butler deactivated her body gaurd programming though she still remembers how to fight

That would be copied from my profile thingy. Might be a bit oudated.

RainaRose

Umm Butler....thats a lot of information. I won't use half of that...just letting you know.

And Leon is crazy but I love him anyway.

princessleia

You have my permission....look up my profile and also I can Regenerate now as well....that is new...ohh and if you need other info that you aren't sure about just pm me okay....

I am very beautiful to look upon it sends the one that I look at to their knees and drool..... Cool

RainaRose

OKAY

Every one who has given me permission this is what I need next.

The characters in my story are indeed, characters. As such they will be a bit different then what you most likely will hope for.

This is NOT repeat NOT a Star Wars story. In fact, the story I am going to be writing will have nothing what so ever to do with Star Wars. Therefore, every one in the story is of the same species. I apologize if this is not what people expected. All of the characters of from the same planet, they are just different from humans.

Now, if there was one place you could be allowed to live, please say what it is.

If you could have a job there, what would it be?

This is relevent to the story.

Lord Vexen

Is the story taking place on a fictional planet or on Earth? I say that because I don't know if I should describe my with detail, or just the country/city.

Crozeus

Go ahead.

Sirak Sazen

Earthwise, I'd be living in a small town in Pennsylvania working as a detective.

Darth Splinter

I'd be a Lawyer in a big city.

Lord Vexen

I'd be a Corporate Lawyer rep for a big company in a city like New York. I'm also rich.

Jiub

Crozeus

I would be an ex film director now real estate tycoon living in a mansion in Berlin.

RainaRose

On Earth. Thats where I am placing it.

Crozeus

Your point?

RainaRose

Not for you Crozzie. For other people who asked.

Crozeus

Oh Ok.

RainaRose

Ok so I was thinking of maybe posting the story. Does every one want to read the story? Each person has an important part and I'd love some direct feed back on characters and help with plot ideas.

We'll take a vote.

Post "Yes" if you want in or "No" if you don't.

Rive Caedo

I don't see why people would approve of you writing them into it if they didn't want to see it.
And if you weren't planning on posting it I don't see why you'd bother politely asking for permission on using them Razz

RainaRose

Well, I didn't know if I was going to post it or not and some people may not want to read it lol.

And I always ask for permission when I want to use people in my works. Except I am going a head and using Jianna, I need some one to create a few problems.

Jiub

As Rive said, we all do want to read it if you have already written part of it.

RainaRose

I don't have the first chapter written. Once I get it written I will post it. ASAP.

The Genre is going to be Drama/Romance/Action

Talen D'aar

Hair: Long
(color): Brown
(style): Shaggy(sometimes I put it back in a ponytail)
Eyes: Hazel (Blue, Green and Brown mixed)
Height: 5'11" maybe 6'0" (Haven't measured myself in a while)
Skin (color): White; Light Paleness (normal color, just a little pale)

Scars, piercings, tattoos, birthmarks: I have a spattering of scars all over my body from little things here and there; notable scars: I have small scars on the left side (when you're looking at me) of my lip which were the scars left from getting stitched up after a dog bite, a scar on my chest (left side, when looking at me) that looks like an upside down Nike symbol, and a couple of scars on my left hand and wrist, no piercings, no tattoos(yet), no birthmarks.

Allies: The Zeison Sha, The Jedi, the people of Yanibar.

Enemies: The Sith, Raiders, Slave Traders, Enemies of Yanibar

Neutral to: Everyone else.

Loyalty to Group:
Deathly Loyal

Where would I live if I could? Either Ireland or Scotland.

The desired job I'd want there? A struggling author working part-time at a patato "crisp" factory to pay the rent. Wink

There you go Raina -- I mean...Den Mother. Laughing

RainaRose

Nah just call me Mom. lol.

Oh good! My character Raina is living in Ireland. I want to have every one spread out at random places in the world. So you and I could meet and be friends! Awesome...

Awesome job. Love it.

Talen D'aar

RainaRose

I'll be a good, loving mother. (Who kills anyone who messes with my Rebel babies!)

Lord Vexen

Well, I live in an Italian villa just outside Rome.

Sirak Sazen

Jianna should be the villain in this story. Razz

RainaRose

...I am going to make Jianna a big problem in the story. Don't you worry about that. I'm going to have her follow the rules hardcore until the rules fall out of her favor.

Lord Vexen

Will she be shot in the face?

RainaRose

...Ummmm I don't know yet.

Lord Vexen

I wasn't serious about that you know...

Jiub

Is Redivan supposed to be Rive? If so, why did you make him a baby-killer? Laughing

Anyways, interesting so far, I'll keep watching.

RainaRose

Nope Redivan is not Rive. Redivan is my own made up character, along with Knoxill. The first Chapter will be up by tonight.

Crozeus

Woot.

RainaRose

lol Crozeus you're in the first chapter.

Crozeus

*Dances*

Lord Invictus

I am too... kinda..

Xander Vos

Talen D'aar

I had my fingers crossed to be in the first chapter too, but alas, Raina's building up suspense before she unveils...TALEN! The "strapped-for-cash writer/potato "crisp" factory worker"!! *echo*..worker...worker....worker

RainaRose

lol Xander is in as Xander and Talen....you MIGHT be in the next scene lol but I'm not giving anything away. lol.

Talen D'aar

Aww, man... Laughing

Sirak Sazen

Crozeus

Patato? Wtf?

Talen D'aar

Sorry, typo. I'm extremely tired.

EDIT: Fixed. Wink

RainaRose

*Rolls eyes* Yup and Talen just might hit on Raina lol.

Talen D'aar

Wow! She really did pick up on our personalities! Laughing

Sirak Sazen

I have to be a sexy beast. Then it would be true. Wink