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A slash in the heart- the destruicton of Barb 1(will start later.)
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ghostjedi17
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Chapter 1- Necto
"Ash... ash... ash....... death....death...death.....war...war...war..." these things keept playing in young Necto Zahhna Naron the III's mind. he is a jedi knight form Barb 1. he is a Barabel and he was proud of it. he had been a man who could be counted uppon. he was prepareing to take an apprentice Aimira a tw'lek jedi hailing from Ryloth. he had a master named Thar Kast. he was a very a very sucessful jedi haveing makeing big leaps for the jedi. he had stolen a sith holocron joined the sith and come back. he has a very outlook on things and has very good friends. but something was wrong. something was about to rock his world. something was about to start that has been being since the old republic
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Lord Vexen
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well that was short
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Jedi Abba
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| Darth Vexen wrote: | | well that was short |
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Sephiroth
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| Jedi Abba wrote: | | Darth Vexen wrote: | | well that was short |
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Krasin Lyell
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| Leon Danex wrote: | | Jedi Abba wrote: | | Darth Vexen wrote: | | well that was short |
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Darth Splinter
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| Krasin Lyell wrote: | | Leon Danex wrote: | | Jedi Abba wrote: | | Darth Vexen wrote: | | well that was short |
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Lord Vexen
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| Darth Splinter wrote: | | Krasin Lyell wrote: | | Leon Danex wrote: | | Jedi Abba wrote: | | Darth Vexen wrote: | | well that was short |
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Darth Carnage
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| Darth Vexen wrote: | | Darth Splinter wrote: | | Krasin Lyell wrote: | | Leon Danex wrote: | | Jedi Abba wrote: | | Darth Vexen wrote: | | well that was short |
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Darth Shadow
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I don't think length has anything to do with... quality.
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Lord Vexen
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or lack there-of
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Xander Vos
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Fine
| Darth Praxeum wrote: | | Darth Vexen wrote: | | Darth Splinter wrote: | | Krasin Lyell wrote: | | Leon Danex wrote: | | Jedi Abba wrote: | | Darth Vexen wrote: | | well that was short and bad |
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Krasin Lyell
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Ok
| Xander Vos wrote: |
| Darth Praxeum wrote: | | Darth Vexen wrote: | | Darth Splinter wrote: | | Krasin Lyell wrote: | | Leon Danex wrote: | | Jedi Abba wrote: | | Darth Vexen wrote: | | well that was short and bad and needed more detail |
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ghostjedi17
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I didn't finsh. my mom had to get on
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Lord Lanik
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| Krasin Lyell wrote: | Ok
| Xander Vos wrote: |
| Darth Praxeum wrote: | | Darth Vexen wrote: | | Darth Splinter wrote: | | Krasin Lyell wrote: | | Leon Danex wrote: | | Jedi Abba wrote: | | Darth Vexen wrote: | | well that was short and bad and needed TONS AND TONS AND TONS detail |
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Thar Kast
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ahh get off his back it was short big woop
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Xander Vos
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Short and bad... 
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ghostjedi17
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you know just lock this. I'll make an rp out of it later
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Lord Vexen
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don't make an RP until the tremor on Ryloth is over
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ghostjedi17
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I know that.
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Grand Vizier Tarna
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| Cain wrote: | | Krasin Lyell wrote: | Ok
| Xander Vos wrote: |
| Darth Praxeum wrote: | | Darth Vexen wrote: | | Darth Splinter wrote: | | Krasin Lyell wrote: | | Leon Danex wrote: | | Jedi Abba wrote: | | Darth Vexen wrote: | | well that was short and bad and needed TONS AND TONS AND TONS detail, and a cameo by Darth Tarna |
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Oh, who wrote that? 
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