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What should this short story focus on?
The young Jedi (7-18) at the Bakuran Temple.
33%
 33%  [ 3 ]
The older Jedi (18-1000+) at the Bakuran Temple.
22%
 22%  [ 2 ]
Armia Delvron's captivity in the lower levels of the Bakuran Temple.
22%
 22%  [ 2 ]
The Bakuran Temple's mascot: a nerf named Scruffy (AKA: I have no opinion, but like voting).
22%
 22%  [ 2 ]
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Before the Storm: A Moment Without Sin
 PostPosted: Mon Mar 02, 2009 4:00 pm Reply with quote  
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  Rive Caedo
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As you probably caught in the other thread if you're a follower of the Without Sin saga, Chapter 5 of Lies of Bakura has been delayed (again!) due to computer troubles.

But, it's a good chance to provide a bit of a short bonus chapter.

So, I'm letting you vote on what you want it to focus on. It'll focus on the Bakuran Temple no matter what - but there's three stories involved there, so I'll focus on whichever y'all are most interested Smile

Make sure you vote ASAP, because I'm planning to write it tomorrow or the day after!
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  Crozeus
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Scruffy ftw.
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 PostPosted: Mon Mar 02, 2009 7:21 pm Reply with quote  
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  Jianna Merrowmere
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I like the idea of the young Jedi.
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Armia's captivity.
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  Darth Acheron
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18-1000? What Jedi are that old?

I like the idea of exploring the kids.
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 PostPosted: Tue Mar 03, 2009 7:06 am Reply with quote  
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My name's Scruffy... the Janitor.


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 PostPosted: Tue Mar 03, 2009 11:15 pm Reply with quote  
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I support old Jedi a lot due to the fact my character is rather old...

Plus, I don't like the idea of making a story on 8 year-old younglings.
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I voted for the old Jedi scenario, but I can see where the children story would be cool. I mean, I'm just picturing them discovering some part of the Bakuran Temple that the elders didn't want them to see. Ooo, Sithy!
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 PostPosted: Wed Mar 04, 2009 7:42 am Reply with quote  
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Since the distribution was:
3 votes for young Jedi.
2 votes for old Jedi.
1 vote for Armia.

I'm trying to include all 3 in the story: with respect to the distribution weights.

We get this section with a look into what Koras has been up to since his brief appearance in the first Without Sin roleplay - since he's an older Jedi. And some focus on younger Jedi as well.

The next section will focus almost entirely on the group of young Jedi. And also probably a sizable bit with Elris Drow (representing the Jedi Council and the older Jedi in the Order). And probably at least a mention of Armia.

And maybe I'll have enough material that I'll even need to split it into a third day - which would presumably also focus on the younger Jedi.

So there you go, this section isn't all that interesting in my opinion (although it is nice to get a glimpse at "daily life" at the Bakuran Temple in this time period and some background material about their methods) - but tomorrow's should be fun I hope Smile

Korus (the user, not the character) - if you get a chance to run the story through a spell check, I'd be grateful. The Wii's spell check gets pretty upset when I start typing things like "Jedi" and "K'reth" - so I turned it off Razz

And, lastly, if anyone else has a character by the name of Rais - please inform me, since he's not quite a throwaway character and I'd rather he have a unique name.
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 PostPosted: Wed Mar 04, 2009 7:47 am Reply with quote  
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I noticed a few mistakes which I can edit for you. Razz
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What the hell? Scruffy got two votes,
I DEMAND EQUAL RECOGNITION!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


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I want a Scruffy cameo.
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I second.
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Koras and Khorus oh my!
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*Korus.



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