Crimsion Red and Knights

RainaRose

Okay so I can't call the story "Crimsion Red and Knights" because that sounds so stupid to even me. So heres what I thought I could do. I selected some names that I thought would sound good, so lets take a vote!

Some of the reason the story will be called the names listed will be explained later. I am just going to have this up for a few days and I am going to go ahead and post the story and change the name later.
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"If you take [a copy of] the Christian Bible and put it out in the wind and the rain, soon the paper on which the words are printed will disintegrate and the words will be gone. Our bible IS the wind and the rain."

Sirak Sazen

Road of Red and Blue sounds pretty cool to me.
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Talen D'aar

Field* of Red and Blue.
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Sirak Sazen

I've honestly never read anything quite like that. It is truly unique. Read over it and you'll find a few mistakes. Other than that, it looks great. I can't wait to read the rest. Very Happy

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Jiub · Knight - 5th Degree Joined: 30 Aug 2006 Posts: 2309

Oh, I posted my first comment (question really) in the thread in the General Discussion area.
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Darth Splinter

Tainted Balance ftw!
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Lord Invictus

I voted for Purple Blood Drops for the laughs.

Just mentally add one more point to Tainted Balance, please?
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RainaRose

Ok. Also, this is the disscussion for the fanfic so any comments go ahead and put them down here. I'll keep that in mind Invictus.
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"If you take [a copy of] the Christian Bible and put it out in the wind and the rain, soon the paper on which the words are printed will disintegrate and the words will be gone. Our bible IS the wind and the rain."

Darth Splinter

When do we come in?
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RainaRose

lol You have to read and find out. The first chapter when I get it posted will pretty give you all the actual starting of the story. The prolog is back ground information.

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"If you take [a copy of] the Christian Bible and put it out in the wind and the rain, soon the paper on which the words are printed will disintegrate and the words will be gone. Our bible IS the wind and the rain."

Darth Splinter

When will you post the next chapter? This seems like a nice break from the common SW writing.
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RainaRose

Just posted it. And it really is going to be a HUGE break.
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"If you take [a copy of] the Christian Bible and put it out in the wind and the rain, soon the paper on which the words are printed will disintegrate and the words will be gone. Our bible IS the wind and the rain."

Darth Splinter

Do you plan on describing people in the story loosely based off of their profile?

I also kind of find it funny how the names seem a bit out of place.
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RainaRose

Upon reading over my first chapter I nearly cried from how badly written it is. I am so re-writing it asap. The second chapter will take a lot of time for me to get up because I want it to sound good so I'll edit it and re write it severl different times. Sorry its so crappy right now.
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"If you take [a copy of] the Christian Bible and put it out in the wind and the rain, soon the paper on which the words are printed will disintegrate and the words will be gone. Our bible IS the wind and the rain."

Darth Splinter

No problem. Could you answer my question though.

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