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Akiva's Story
 PostPosted: Tue May 02, 2006 10:16 pm Reply with quote  
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  Lady Saber
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(OK, Lisa is totally making me doing this. I wrote this out of pure boredom and never planned to post it. She's just bribing me with things. Razz Yeah, so please, try not to be too harsh. This is the second fiction I've done, after the Hoth one. And, like I said, I never intended on posting it, since I'm not really a good writer.So, it's all Lisa's fault! Cool )


Chapter 1

Akiva strode down the dirtied streets of Coruscant. She had just officially left the Jedi Order, a few hours earlier. She had a brief meeting with the Jedi Council leaders, and calmly explained to them that this was not her ideal “living.” Surprisingly to her, they had granted her approval to leave without any resistance. It was probably because they were fed up with her, as talented as she may be, they couldn’t risk having such a Jedi with them, but they couldn’t risk to have her not in their grasp as well.

Some leaders, Akiva thought to herself. What’s wrong with them? They’re not truly going to let me roam alone, are they? After all of their bickering over me? Wow, they must be denser than I had originally thought.

Akiva entered the small shipyard. Her close friend, and owner of the minor business, had promised her a small fighter for a very minute amount, and it was already prepped for flight at one of the landing pads. She lightly jogged to the unmanned vehicle, hopped in and entered the coordinates for Tatooine.

She had planned to gather some credits for herself by getting a job that put her combat skills to work. She’d make due with victims swiftly, efficiently, and cleanly. That should be rewarded with enough currency to let her at least get by, or so she wished that will be so. If she could even find a job where she was planning to go.

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She was granted permission to descend onto the planet, and with the approval did so.

Her small fighter jerked slightly as she maneuvered the ship into a landing position. The landing claws screamed as the ship made contact with the landing pad.

“No wonder why Glask gave me this thing for so cheap- it’s worth...come to think of it, I doubt this piece of junk is worth anymore than well, nothing, geesh,” she muttered with a sigh.

She unbuckled herself from the restraints, and the cockpit opened to let the hot, dry air of Tatooine flood in on her.

“I think I’m gonna have the time of my life here,” she muttered sarcastically, rolling her eyes, as she climbed out of the cockpit onto the surface of the fighter’s wing, and jumped off.
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Chapter 2

Akiva quietly walked down Mos Eisely’s sandy side market shops and alleyways. The squat, cream-colored buildings made up a lot of the blank scenery. Though boring the landscape may be, the spaceport itself was full of life. Crowds consisting of humanoids, aliens, and the like swarmed through both wide and narrow alleys, markets, and pretty much anywhere else imaginable.

Akiva hadn’t really planned this far ahead. Being unprepared wasn’t going to help her much if her intentions were aimed on surviving. She didn’t know how exactly she was going to get a job, or what kind of job, in fact. Something that she would be able to harvest enough credits in profits to at least get her by.

She still couldn’t believe that the Jedi had just let her go like that. Was she that invaluable to them? Suddenly a chill ran up her spine; she wasn’t alone. She couldn’t be. How could she be so blind to this? They had to have one of their agents or likewise tracking her. That would explain the strange sensation she kept experiencing on the flight here.
The Jedi were smarter than she thought.

“Damn,” Akiva muttered angrily, unsure of what exactly to do. “Well, I guess, maybe, I could find him...her...whatever, and give…this Jedi two options: Leave me be and report that he had found nothing out of the ordinary that the Jedi should concern themselves with. Or..get killed.” A smirk twisted her lips. “Yeah, I’m not that kind of person. But, I’ll do it. And, whoever they sent knows it, I’m sure.”

Better start where the rest of this scum starts, Akiva decided, as she stepped into the dimly lit Mos Eisley Cantina.

The air was thick with cigarra smoke and the piquant aroma of alcoholic juices. The cantina was like the gathering grounds for crude business deals, and the like, so Akiva thought she might be able to scarf up a temporary job here. She just wanted to get away from all of the lectures, classes, and strictness the Jedi temple contained, and enter the real world.

Akiva settled herself into a vacant seat at the bar and ordered a drink. A few of the humanoids several seats down the bar table started to stare at her, and she pondered on why they were doing so until she swept her eyes down across her lap. She noticed that she stupidly left her Jedi attire on, along with her lightsaber.

She frowned in concentration as she touched the simple minds through the Force, taking their attention elsewhere. Then, she brought a portion of her dark robe over the lightsaber hilt dangling from her belt.

Well, so far, I have been pretty dense in this, Akiva thought to herself. I need to get better at…this independent stuff, I suppose. Just don’t make anymore mistakes… Her train of thought was interrupted by the bartender, as he set her drink down in front of her.

“5 credits,” he grunted hoarsely.

The man was of medium height and stocky. His stained white undershirt and ebony vest were reeking with the stench of unwashed garments and alcohol.

Akiva slipped her fingers into her petite shoulder bag, retrieved the right amount. She placed the currency in front of her, trying hard not to breathe while he was before her. He grabbed the credits off of the table and stalked over to the next person.

Akiva exhaled as the stinking bartender moved on. She sipped at her drink as she looked around the cantina. At the different smugglers, bounty hunters, mercenaries, and the like that occupied the booths, the bar, or were just roaming around on their feet. She wondered if any of these strangers would be willing to accept her for aservice. She sure hoped so. Though, she was aware that merely looking for a potential employer here was dangerous.

While Akiva was busying herself with scouting, she also kept her eye peeled for her “stalker.” She wondered how the agent, or whatever, was even be able to track her…Well, if there even was someone following her. She left the temple on foot, in fact, abandoning her Jedi starfighter, making any attempt to plant a homing beacon to it futile. Although discarding of the fighter was intentional, it proved not to be the wisest idea…She didn’t expect the fighter Glask provided to be such wreckage, either. So, as a result of that she was going to have to acquire a new ship, not to mention a place to stay, currency, a job, and well, too many things that Akiva really wanted to think about at the moment.
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Chapter 3

“What in the hell!” an oversized Trandoshan growled, shoving the booth table over in an angry fury, the shot glasses that had been sitting atop of it, now shattered into a thousand crystalline pieces as they hit the floor. The human opposite him backed up slightly, escaping the broken glass and the fallen table, along with the furious alien.

“What kind of a business are you running here?” the Trandoshan snarled, trying to compose himself some, for the cantina had gone silent, with only a few in the crowd whispering amongst themselves.

The bartender set down the bottle in which he had been holding, and started towards the potential fight scene. He made it halfway there before the human’s hand disappeared from sight as it dropped down to his loose-fitting utility belt. His hand reappeared with a small, atypical blaster in its grip. Its muzzle shifted from the Trandoshan to the bartender, who stopped in his tracks, now becoming just another spectator blending in with the crowd. Then, the human angled the blaster back to aim at the humanoid.

“Don’t do anything stupid, Lastif. It may be the last think you end up doing,” the man chided.

The Trandoshan, Lastif, laid off, unclenching his fists and standing uneasily still, yet he continued to mutter barely audible growls. The blaster at the alien’s side was too far off, he’d never be able to draw it without the human noticing the movement. So he was sort of stuck there.

“I got the wrong guy, big deal,” Lastif murmured cautiously. “Give me another chance, Brev. I guess I’ll settle for, oh, let’s say half the credits you’ve offered. You can’t just lay me off after one measly mistake. Even after the years we’ve been working together?” the Trandoshan said, trying hard to hide the pleading tone in his voice, but Akiva, and probably everyone else, could pick it out easily.

“I can,” Brev replied. “And, I am,” the man said coolly. “I can’t afford these “mistakes,” Lastif. And our relationship was nothing more than business.”

Lastif seemed to be taken aback. “Brev, listen, I –"

“Goodbye,” Brev broke him off smoothly. He gestured towards the open entranceway of the cantina with the muzzle of his blaster, in an almost threatening gesture.

Lastif narrowed his eyes at him, and glanced toward the entry. Brev’s blaster had not so much as twitched when Lastif returned his gaze to him. The Trandoshan gave one last snarl and staggered backwards, turning his back only after he was certain that he had stepped into safe territory.

By now, the cantina had gone back to normal pretty much, the usual buzz of conversation between multi-species beings started up again, filling the cantina.

The human that had been with the Trandoshan, had drifted near the bar, as a squat cleanup droid scurried to tidy up the litter at the overturned booth table. He took a seat in a stool next to Akiva, which was vacated by a Gotal that had left to spectate the quarrel, but never returned.

The man groaned as he sat, resting his head in his hand, as he ordered Jawa Juice. The bartender returned with his drink and set it in front of him. Sensing the man’s uneasiness, the bartender never asked for pay.

Akiva continued sipping at her drink, but a sliver of hope had just confronted her, and she knew it.

Maybe…just maybe, she thought, turning towards the man. He didn’t seem to notice her looking at him, so she lightly tapped at his shoulder.

“Excuse me, sir,” she said softly.

The man, momentarily startled, jerked his hand away from his face, and looked at her.

“What?” he asked tiredly, turning back to his drink.

“Well, I noticed you lost one of your…employees, and-“

“Listen, sweetheart, none of that concerned you, or anyone here for that matter,” he cut her off. “I suggest you just go back to wherever you came from and get away from this,” he said. “You don’t look like you came from here anyways,” he murmured, turning his eyes on her. His eyes skimmed down her body. “Business here isn’t very luxurious.”

No, I’m not going back there… Akiva thought to herself.

“Listen, I need a job. Real bad, sir,” Akiva said, trying to mask the desperation in her voice. “Would you be willing to accept me?”

“Are you willing to kill?” he replied coldly. He didn’t seem to be taking this as seriously as she had anticipated.

Akiva pondered over it. She would be able to do this type of job better than any Trandoshan could even dream to. It’d be worth a try.

“Yes, sir. I have great combat skills, too. I can show you if you don’t believe me,” Akiva said, her attempt at hiding the desperation failing.

Brev looked at her slight build, his neutral face turning into a slight frown.

“Come with me,” he said, getting up. He motioned for Akiva to follow him out of the Mos Eisley Cantina.
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I love it Kasey, it is so much better than mine. I'll send you that gif I bribed you with when you get back on, lol. Laughing
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this is sweet.I'm getting mad at waiting for Chapter 3, though, lol.


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its AWSOME!!!! and its about time u finaly decide to do it
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Nice job. I like it a lot.
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Very good Kasey. Very Happy
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Chapter 4

Akiva sat impatiently in a finely carved black wood chair. Before her stood a polished ebony desk with several downsized statues of some sort sitting on the black, their reflections gleaming on the shining desk surface.

A soft click and a smooth electronic whine became audible as the durasteel doors to the elaborate room slid open. Akiva swayed her head toward the source of the sound to find that the man she had learned to call Brev, entered.

He walked in a nonchalant gate to take his place in the delicately carved, cushioned, semi-circular chair opposite Akiva, behind the desk. He settled himself in his seat, placing his elbows on the desk surface and interlocking his slim fingers.

“Welcome to my office…” Brev greeted, trailing off in mid-sentence.

“Akiva,” she finished for him.

“Akiva,” he echoed thoughtfully. “Cute name.”

Brev had this strange tone in his voice that somehow made others, Akiva, at least, feel indignant, inadequate.

“Erm, thanks,” she muttered wearily. “I thought you said business here wasn’t luxurious,” Akiva said, surveying the intricate design in the office.

Brev chuckled lightly. “I said the business wasn’t luxurious. I never said the base couldn’t be.”

Akiva nodded. “I see,” she said quietly, trying to sound composed, despite the fact of her anxiety.

Brev let out a short sigh. “All right,” he started. “Now for the business at hand. You said you need a job, correct?”

Akiva shook her head yes, biting her lip unconsciously.

“Well, I’m usually willing to help someone in need…Especially if it’s a young lass like yourself.” He grinned diffidently, sensing Akiva’s slight uneasiness.

She shrugged, trying to seem a little lively. “Hear me, Brev…Is it ok if I call you that?” she asked.

“Go ahead.”

Akiva nodded. “As I was saying, I’m in need of a job that gives enough pay that would let some one with, well, nothing, to get by. Are there any positions I might be able to fill? Even if it’s only temporary—I’ll take anything.”

“Actually, Akiva, there is. That Trandoshan you saw once was one of my assassins. But, he was reckless and took the life of an erroneous person.” He said coldly. “That’s intolerable.”

“I understand,” Akiva answered irresolutely, unsure of what exactly to say in response.

“You said you’d take anything. I’m in short supply of assassins, would you be ready to take that job if I decide on hiring you?” Brev asked, his gaze shifting around at the different holo artwork in the room.

“Of course. I’d be chiefly good in that area, in fact,” Akiva replied.

Brev, again, looked unconvinced. “How about, before I hire you, I see you in action…Deal?”

“Deal,” Akiva said, eager to show him what she could do.

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Brev walked briskly down the ship corridors, with Akiva in step close behind. She gawked at the ship’s detailed interior, contrary to the tarnished outer plating.

“What kind of ship is this anyway?” she asked at last.

“A tremendously modified Bulk Cruiser. Ideal for smuggling work,” Brev responded.

Smuggling, so that’s what his business is, Akiva thought. “Interesting,” she said.

“Indeed. Don’t let its exterior fool you.”

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They entered a small chamber, dimly lit. It had several combat droids scattered around the floor.

“Well, Akiva, here we are. This is where we send the weak and unfortunate…Well, that’s where we send the weak and unfortunate,” he corrected himself, gesturing to a corner of the room where a diminutive torture machine was planted. “Anyway, this doubles as a sort of “auditioning” room for aspiring assassins and likewise.”

Akiva nodded in understanding, glancing timidly at the affliction mechanism.

“And, those there-,” he waved a lazy hand to the inactive droids, “-are combat droids. Designed for hand-to-hand warfare. Think you can handle it?”

“I can handle anything,” Akiva replied with poise.

“I’m sure you can,” Brev said, almost amused by her confidence. “OK, on my count: three…two…one.” His fingers grazed a switch on a console attached to the rigid wall.

Akiva watched as three of the droids’ eyes lit up with life, their jointed bodies unfolding from their self-contained, squatting position, into a straight, bulky, droid contour. They shifted into a combat stance with a soft electronic whine. They were in a triangle formation, the the droid at the apex was farthest from her, either of the other two droids standing in a vanguard position.

Akiva stood for a few moments, marveling at the droids’ smooth movements. Then, she prompted herself, and charged to the right most droid. The machine reacted almost immediately, its reflexes slowed ever so slightly by its dawdling electronic relay. She flipped over it, and kicked it from behind. The droid, not completely turned to face her yet, staggered backwards some, but regained its poise and threw a mighty fist at her shoulder, she dodged it, and while still in a crouch, spun around, her leg outstretched and catching the droid square in its torso. The droid fell backward toward the ground.

Akiva hazarded a glance at Brev, who, again, swept his hand athwart the console. She looked down at the droid to find its once brightly lit eyes, slowly fading into nothingness.

The droid at the center had now started to advance her. Akiva jerked her attention away from the lifeless droid and shifted it to the oncoming one. This particular one tried a different approach, using its weak repulsorlifts to stealthily sail over Akiva’s head, landing practically on top of her, then he punted at the back of her knee. Her joint locked, and she started to fall, but she turned the fall into a roll and jumped up, kicking the further droid in its metal skull. Its neck wrenched to the side a bit, but it kept progressing.


I wonder if I should use the Force…, Akiva contemplated. I’d have a better chance…no lightsaber, though…She didn’t have forever to think, so she just did what instinct told her to do.

She turned to face the progressing droid, and pushed it back with a strong Force wave. The droid ruptured as it hit the cold wall, and its eyes also faded into black.

Akiva spun around, ready for the remaining droid, but it failed to budge. She looked up into its eyes circles, but their light, as well, was deserting them.

Befuddled, Akiva turned to face Brev, who encompassed a mildly flabbergasted expression across his face, his hand at rest on the console switch.

“What happened?” Akiva asked naively.

“I believe it is you who should answer that,” he retorted, his grip on the console loosening, and his hand fell to his side.
Akiva pondered on what he was talking about for a moment, but then her memory caught up with her. This might be a little hard to explain.

“The Force,” she said hesitantly. “You have heard of it, haven’t you? It’s not exactly rare.”

“Ah, yes,” he stuttered. “Of course.” Brev’s gazes drifted to the wrecked droid slumped against the wall. “But, how did you learn to wield it?”

Might as well tell him. He seems trustworthy enough, I hope…”Eh, ex-Jedi. Life got a bit boring over there. I wanted a taste of the real world,” Akiva said, attempting at a casual tone.

“A Jedi, you say?” Brev inquired.

“Ex-Jedi,” Akiva corrected him.

“Well…” Brev started, still in the process of soaking it all in. “You’re right. You do have skills.”

“So…am I hired?” Akiva hazarded.

“Certainly.”
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Nice. You sure have a nice vocabulary.... Very Happy
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Wow Kasey, I love it. It is definitely much better than mine.
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John: Lol, thanks. It helps one envision it easier.

Lisa: Moo. Yeah, right. Your fan-fic's a-w-e-s-o-m-e.
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Darth Saber wrote:


Lisa: Moo. Yeah, right. Your fan-fic's a-w-e-s-o-m-e.



Nu uh, almost every fan fic on this forum is better than mine.
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Don't make me go all LALALALALALA on you!

Too late.

LALALALALA! I'm not listening!
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interesting , i like it , you would be a good writer Smile



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