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A few things to look out for:
- Put Gender on a different line to Name.
- Your not a Jedi Knight, still a padawan.
- Phase is spelt with a P not an F.
- Your eyes glow red when you feel emotion? No one can have that happen. Only the Sith have their eyes glowe orange when they feel hatred, yet you, a Jedi have it happen even if you were feeling imense happiness.
- Your 15, yet you weigh 10 kilos less then me, a 14 yr old who is actually UNDER the average.
- Your able to teleport yourself, no one can do that in the SW universe, unless you mean something else by "warp" _________________
Time to start again.
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