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Posted: Mon Mar 09, 2009 10:44 am
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Xander Vos Sith Emperor Joined: 08 Jan 2006 Posts: 19752 Location: The Sith Temple Just likely a one-shot at this stage, just hadn't written anything in a while. May make more detailing other adventures of his in the Clone Wars, a la my three first person stories from Vos's mother's perspective. _________________ Time to start again. Last edited by Xander Vos on Wed Mar 11, 2009 4:04 am; edited 1 time in total

Posted: Mon Mar 09, 2009 7:49 pm
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Sirak Sazen Knight - 5th Degree Joined: 25 Sep 2008 Posts: 5587 Location: The Asylum Sirak Sazen wrote: Working title: Frontline Release date: Aiming for February 1

Posted: Mon Mar 09, 2009 7:52 pm
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Rive Caedo Jedi Grand Master Joined: 02 Dec 2005 Posts: 8294 Location: Kallibann This is Frontlines. Not Frontline. Note the S! I mean, you wouldn't call Alien and Aliens the same movie. Would you? _________________ May The Force Be With Us, Always

Posted: Mon Mar 09, 2009 8:09 pm
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Sirak Sazen Knight - 5th Degree Joined: 25 Sep 2008 Posts: 5587 Location: The Asylum Yeah but Aliens sucked.

Posted: Mon Mar 09, 2009 8:10 pm
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Rive Caedo Jedi Grand Master Joined: 02 Dec 2005 Posts: 8294 Location: Kallibann Due to Sirak disparaging the name of a classic Sci-Fi movie in the top 250 movies on IMDB, Rebels has chosen to disassociate itself with... Anyway, I'll read this later tonight, Korus. _________________ May The Force Be With Us, Always

Posted: Tue Mar 10, 2009 4:58 am
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Xander Vos Sith Emperor Joined: 08 Jan 2006 Posts: 19752 Location: The Sith Temple Sirak Sazen wrote: Yeah but Aliens sucked. It's widely thought of as one of the only sequels better than the original... And about the titles, had no idea honestly, just thought it worked as a Clone Wars-ish title. Been watching too many episodes of that show lately. _________________ Time to start again.

Posted: Tue Mar 10, 2009 8:20 pm
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Yodafueva me Jedi Master - Veteran Joined: 05 Dec 2005 Posts: 3030 Location: Superunknown Sirak Sazen wrote: Yeah but Aliens sucked. Get out. _________________

Posted: Wed Mar 11, 2009 4:05 am
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Xander Vos Sith Emperor Joined: 08 Jan 2006 Posts: 19752 Location: The Sith Temple Guess it wasn't a one shot. Felt a creative urge today. _________________ Time to start again.

Posted: Wed Mar 11, 2009 4:13 am
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Rive Caedo Jedi Grand Master Joined: 02 Dec 2005 Posts: 8294 Location: Kallibann Gah, you changed the thread title! I opened that thread and said to myself: "Wait, did he seriously just write 2 complete chapters of a story in this tiny amount of time? Good heavens! I can hardly get out one chapter per month " _________________ May The Force Be With Us, Always

Posted: Wed Mar 11, 2009 4:18 am
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Xander Vos Sith Emperor Joined: 08 Jan 2006 Posts: 19752 Location: The Sith Temple Didn't seem right to keep the first short story's title as the thread. _________________ Time to start again.

Posted: Sun Mar 15, 2009 6:11 am
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Dakoth Senior Jedi Council Member Joined: 31 Jan 2006 Posts: 11218 Location: Arkua Hm, pretty interesting, I like the first person perspective, although I find its hard to write extended stories in it.  Only thing I can criticize is your need of a theasurusrsurusrusursurusarurauas in the first mini chapter.  You said struggling like 9 times during the fight.   _________________ Audi famam illius                                    Aftershock.

Posted: Sun Mar 15, 2009 6:14 am
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Xander Vos Sith Emperor Joined: 08 Jan 2006 Posts: 19752 Location: The Sith Temple Probably true, I didn't fine comb the stories, thought it better just to get down what I was thinking/feeling about them and post them. _________________ Time to start again.

Posted: Thu Mar 19, 2009 12:53 am
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Talen D'aar Jedi Apprentice Joined: 20 May 2008 Posts: 645 Location: Surviving the harsh climates of Yanibar. I've only read the first post, but it was a good beginning. I thought the fist fighting was a little out of place. Three ARC Troopers with huge guns and heavy guns are gonna run when one of their guys starts fighting? I mean, I know they're clones, but they're not that cowardly. I thought they would've opened fire the moment they saw an enemy. Other than that, great start. EDIT: I also liked the way made it feel in the first few paragraphs, before they started the attack. It made me feel like I was playing CoD and I was about to storm the beaches of Normandy or something. Which I liked. _________________

Posted: Thu Mar 19, 2009 1:51 am
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Xander Vos Sith Emperor Joined: 08 Jan 2006 Posts: 19752 Location: The Sith Temple The ARC's were implied to have run away because Korus jumped to that conclusion, but then when Mandalore made an announcement to retreat because they were being pushed back, I thought it was clear that was because all Clones had gone to help stop them destroying the cloning material. It's just short stories, so it's not really a beginning, they're just random tales of Korus' time in the Clone Wars. _________________ Time to start again.

Posted: Thu Mar 19, 2009 2:04 am
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Talen D'aar Jedi Apprentice Joined: 20 May 2008 Posts: 645 Location: Surviving the harsh climates of Yanibar. But wouldn't the troopers at least try to kill the guys they had in front of them, then go help? _________________

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