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Raai Techo
 PostPosted: Sun Sep 06, 2009 1:13 am Reply with quote  
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  TheDoctor
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Joined: 23 Jun 2009
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Location: Elsewhere

Name: Raai Techo

Age: 31+

Species: Zeltron

Occupation: 'Traveling Wise-a$$'

Appearance: An old Mandolorian Mask that keeps his long brown hair stick out. Without the mask, has round tinted glasses. Besides the mask, he wears a dirtied Coat and plain shirt underneath it.

Weapons: Dart Shooter *With Tranquilizers*, Stun Baton, Ion Pistols.

Equipment: Repair Kit, Medical kit, Recreational Drugs, 900,000 Credits on hand, Ice-pick.

Bio: Raai was born on a planet far away from his own. He was born on a little place called Coruisant (3 years and I still can't spell...) And there he learned something. It isn't the people that control the galaxy. It's the Corporations and the Governments. Not the actual people. And he hated that.

Raai went to school as an overly rebellious child, and as soon as he got out of it, he began to get connections into certain underworld agency's, with connections in the Senate, and slowly took control of them. After he did that, he turned them into Anti-Society agencys, and led them around all sorts of worlds, Protesting and Stealing documents from oppressive and all kinds of stuff like that. And he now travels as the leader of said organization, called 'Imagine Co.' Currently he is being chased by psychotic droids.



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 PostPosted: Sun Sep 06, 2009 6:14 pm Reply with quote  
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  Lord Invictus
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Good but...

It's a little Mary Sue-esque that your character has 900,000,000 credits, but has no affiliation with the Jedi or Sith.

And that you had corrupted the senate, yet lack any substantial affiliation or rank... that's a pretty massive undertaking.
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 PostPosted: Sun Sep 06, 2009 6:20 pm Reply with quote  
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  TheDoctor
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Yeah, I thought about that myself..I'll be tiding up for the past few days.

And he does have an affiliation. 'Imagine Inc.' Which was created by corrupting several large Underworld Organizations. I'll also be lowering the Credits alot. I should probably leave about 3 Zeros off of that number.



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