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Posted: Fri Jun 16, 2006 2:33 am
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Dakoth Senior Jedi Council Member Joined: 31 Jan 2006 Posts: 12040 Location: Arkua In this thread you can discuss how you think aspects of the people on the forum can improve. for example, if you think that RP's are to god-moddy or that some certain person is spamming too much (Use DAKOTH for anominimity*) for example: "lately DAKOTH has been in the buisness of flaming people and I think we all need to get along" "People need to stop posting these *insert silly other forum topic here*!!" there.. that made sense... I think.. _________________ Audi famam illius                                    Aftershock.

Posted: Fri Jun 16, 2006 2:52 am
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SkywalkerAndVader Senior Jedi Council Member Joined: 02 Dec 2005 Posts: 6750 Location: Ban Control Not trying to be mean, but many a times has he been lectured, but GhostJedi17 needs to read this: http://rebels.myfreeforum.org/ftopic2452.php and this post by our friend Rive Caedo Quote: Although I'll probably make my own "How to Roleplay" guide in the future, for now I'd just like to add these notes: You can add emphasis to a word by bolding it, underlining it, or sometimes itallics (itallics are often best used for other modes of speech besides emphasis however, such as sarcasm: "Sure, I'll get right to work on that, sir."). This helps convey your meaning and speech patterns. Or a combination of them if something needs special emphasis. Examples: "There is no escape. Don't make me destroy you. You do not yet realize your importance. Luke, you have only begun to discover your power. Join me and I will complete your training. With our combined strength, we can end this destructive conflict and bring order to the galaxy." "I'll never join you!" "If you only knew the power of the dark side. Obi-Wan never told you what happened to your father." "He told me enough! He told me you killed him." "No. I am your father." "No. No. That's not true! That's impossible!" "Search your feelings. You know it to be true." "No! No! No!" "Luke. You can destroy the Emperor. He has foreseen this. It is your destiny. Join me, and we can rule the galaxy as father and son. Come with me. It's the only way." again, not trying to be mean, just trying to help. _________________

Posted: Fri Jun 16, 2006 3:08 am
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ghostjedi17 Grey Jedi Joined: 07 Apr 2006 Posts: 3731 Location: wacthing the NEW adventures of Make paint dry faster man and pat belly and head at the same time man 'Da heck!? I do not god mode ANYMORE! end of converstion _________________ Death Note III: L change the WorLd 9-2-08

Posted: Fri Jun 16, 2006 3:09 am
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SkywalkerAndVader Senior Jedi Council Member Joined: 02 Dec 2005 Posts: 6750 Location: Ban Control Oh, it wasn't directed at god-modding, its directing at form, grammar, etc. _________________

Posted: Fri Jun 16, 2006 3:17 am
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Dork of Mordork Jedi Council Member Joined: 12 Dec 2005 Posts: 10507 Location: Lemoore, CA Sorry Ghost, but John is right... _________________

Posted: Fri Jun 16, 2006 3:42 am
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Jedi Abba Grand Master Joined: 01 Dec 2005 Posts: 6492 I'm even known to mis-spell quite a bit of words. It is kinda annoying...I annoy myself when I do it Don't worry about it Ghost, just read over everything before you post it! _________________

Posted: Fri Jun 16, 2006 4:07 am
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SkywalkerAndVader Senior Jedi Council Member Joined: 02 Dec 2005 Posts: 6750 Location: Ban Control Quote: Necto got out his lightsaber. (Lets use real sabers. and make it training.) "Well well well.' He said "Lets begin." He said again. he went into a spining motian and sliced at Bulter. then he jumped up and whent into Ataur. "Didn't see that now did you?" Just a few pointers for ya, Ghost, heres how you can form it better. ((OCC: Let's use real sabers, and make it training)) Necto got out his lightsaber. "Well, well, well" he said "Let's begin" Necto went into a spinning motion, and sliced at Butler. Then, he jumped up and went into Ataru. "Didn't see that coming, now did you" said Necto I fixed a lot of the spacing, out of character work, and what have you in that post, also your spelling has a lot to be desired, one or two words is fine, but I fixed quite a few. Just take your time when you type, it isn't a race, because then people will understand better, and you won't have confusion. Another example Quote: "that was good." Necto said. "But i'm not going down" Necto said still standing "That was good." said Necto. "But I'm not going down" Capitalization is also nice. Also, when you are refering to somemone speaking, you don't have to repeat yourself, if its part of the same line, what I mean is that it could easily be: "That was good, but I'm not going down" said Necto You wouldn't say it twice that way, now would you? Ok, now I feel like I'm picking on you, not trying to, just helping you become a better Roleplayer. _________________

Posted: Fri Jun 16, 2006 4:09 pm
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Dakoth Senior Jedi Council Member Joined: 31 Jan 2006 Posts: 12040 Location: Arkua constructive criticism is good i think people on this forum need to be more open to reading other people's fanfics as well (cough read jadens!) they put a lot of work into these things and really appreciate feedback. and If you start reading someone elses, who knows, maybe they'll read yours! _________________ Audi famam illius                                    Aftershock.

Posted: Sat Jun 17, 2006 10:35 am
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Darth Acheron Sith Emperor Joined: 08 Jan 2006 Posts: 20577 Location: The Sith Temple I think this is a great idea, and would be keen to see upon what I could improve, . _________________ Time to start again.

Posted: Sat Jun 17, 2006 2:26 pm
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ghostjedi17 Grey Jedi Joined: 07 Apr 2006 Posts: 3731 Location: wacthing the NEW adventures of Make paint dry faster man and pat belly and head at the same time man So.....imberssed...can't....move....must...send....bounty....hunters....to......kill....you....John...or...call...super....Rive.....*pulls out signal and press button and 6 guys in jetpacks appear* lol _________________ Death Note III: L change the WorLd 9-2-08

Posted: Sat Jun 17, 2006 5:30 pm
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Dork of Mordork Jedi Council Member Joined: 12 Dec 2005 Posts: 10507 Location: Lemoore, CA Do be embarrassed. He's just giving you some help, not trying to get under your skin. _________________

Posted: Sat Jun 17, 2006 8:27 pm
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R2-D-TOA Jedi Youngling Joined: 30 Mar 2006 Posts: 60 Location: Ord Cestus man, what is up with all these people correcting others on grammer ?, its way nit-picky _________________

Posted: Sat Jun 17, 2006 9:21 pm
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Dork of Mordork Jedi Council Member Joined: 12 Dec 2005 Posts: 10507 Location: Lemoore, CA We're not watching people like a hawk and correcting their grammar every chance we get. We're just trying to help, because it gets quite annoying when someone roleplays with terrible grammar. _________________

Posted: Sat Jun 17, 2006 9:27 pm
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ghostjedi17 Grey Jedi Joined: 07 Apr 2006 Posts: 3731 Location: wacthing the NEW adventures of Make paint dry faster man and pat belly and head at the same time man I am a REALLY bad speller so don't be surprised if I screw up _________________ Death Note III: L change the WorLd 9-2-08

Posted: Sat Jun 17, 2006 9:30 pm
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SkywalkerAndVader Senior Jedi Council Member Joined: 02 Dec 2005 Posts: 6750 Location: Ban Control Rights, understandable, but its not a race, just take your time. People would much rather look at this: Quote: ((OCC: Let's use real sabers, and make it training)) Necto got out his lightsaber. "Well, well, well" he said "Let's begin" Necto went into a spinning motion, and sliced at Butler. Then, he jumped up and went into Ataru. "Didn't see that coming, now did you" said Necto Then This Quote: Necto got out his lightsaber. (Lets use real sabers. and make it training.) "Well well well.' He said "Lets begin." He said again. he went into a spining motian and sliced at Bulter. then he jumped up and whent into Ataur. "Didn't see that now did you?" _________________

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