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 PostPosted: Wed May 14, 2008 6:49 am Reply with quote  
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  Rive Caedo
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Bwahaha. Hopefully I was able to mislead most people from realizing I was playing around in two eras until the word "artoo" appeared Very Happy

The little quickie illustrations may seem just for fun now, but are eventually integrated into the story... although they're mostly just for fun   Razz



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 PostPosted: Wed May 14, 2008 7:12 am Reply with quote  
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  Xander Vos
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Haha yeah, I thought it was Rive coming back from some sort of expedition.

I like the inclusion, strangely enough, of Luke, though I guess that means we should basically just acknowledge that after ROTJ, the EU splits off into our one where the novels still exist, but our events also happen, or something.
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 PostPosted: Wed May 14, 2008 7:25 am Reply with quote  
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  Rive Caedo
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While if I'd been active roleplay-wise while canon was being established - I'd probably have taken that route. I think it's too late for that now though.

So, I deliberately let this not disrupt the current timeline. The "future" portion of the fanfiction occurs in 8 ABY - one year before Thrawn's campaign and our timeline diverges. So Luke is still very much alive, Coruscant has just been retaken by the Republic, and Han and Leia are about to get married.

The only changes I've made to the timeline is that Luke encountered the Bakuran Temple at the end of the Battle of Bakura in 3 ABY - and has now returned in 8 ABY for reasons that will soon be revealed.
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 PostPosted: Wed May 14, 2008 7:28 am Reply with quote  
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Well, reguardless, I'm liking it quite a lot so far, and look forward to the next bits.

*Hopes Korus gets a mention*
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I think all the vets from the Without Sin series will at least get a mentions.

And by I think I mean they should...
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 PostPosted: Wed May 14, 2008 7:33 am Reply with quote  
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Well I've already agreed with Rive that I want Korus staying on Bakura until the next adventure so that he has time to recuperate from the adventure. Wink
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 PostPosted: Wed May 14, 2008 7:36 am Reply with quote  
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Oh, rest assured, Korus will be getting a bit more than a mention - considering you've already given me permission to do certain things with him. And he's one of the character's I don't "own" that don't feel too bad about playing fast and loose with, since I helped to establish him originally in Kallibann.

I feel a bit worse about playing around with Abba and such, but I don't foresee her becoming active again in roleplays any time soon. So - the storyline takes precedence! She's an important character that deserves to have some background and personality instead of being skirted around. She'll mostly act as a foil to Rive.

The same goes for anyone else, by the way. Although this story will obviously be somewhat Rive-centric, since I "own" him, if you PM me with what your character would logically be doing during these 5 years or how they'd react to some of the events coming up in future chapters of the story, I'll do my best to integrate it.

EDIT: I just uploaded the "Signature Teaser" for chapter 2 (which I spent way too much time on due to saying "Ooo, she should have a necklace thing to match her hairband/headband!" "Ooo, she should have a Pacathium pendent set in that necklace!" "Hm... why would they be using metal bars? They should probably be energy based" etc - these are supposed to be quickie images!). If my posts are the right length (I think this one will be just about right, after this edit), it looks like she's looking up towards my Rive avatar. Totally non-deliberate, but pretty cool Smile
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 PostPosted: Wed May 14, 2008 10:33 pm Reply with quote  
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  Jaden Nightsaber
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I really like this so far.  I think the images are an awesome touch.  I like the "Y. Walker" one.  Could it be that the rest of the image would have said [Sk]ywalker?  Who knows?!

But as for Nova, I'm sure he would have stuck around only for a little bit and then went back to Nar Shaddaa to reclaim is grasp on the underworld.  So I wouldn't worry about him.
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Quite nice Rive, I shall be reading it intently, spamming every chapter with vauge mentions of Aftershock in order to steal attention.
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Very intreuging. For once, I actually feel like following a fanfic. Can't wait for chapter II. Keep 'em rollin' in!
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Hmph, is that meant to imply ANOTHER person hasn't been following DE?
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Xander Vos wrote:
Hmph, is that meant to imply ANOTHER person hasn't been following DE?


No, it's just that that fanfic began before my time, and I was too lazy to just read it all.  Smile  Sorry. One of these days I'll read it.... ONCE I GET THE INTERNET WORKING! C'MON YOU PIECE OF JUNK!  Twisted Evil
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Hmph. Razz
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It is a fairly huge piece of literature, I procrastinated for a while before getting down to reading it, which I can say I was sorry I didn't do earlier.
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 PostPosted: Thu May 15, 2008 2:29 am Reply with quote  
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Why thank you. Smile

I must admit to a certain amount of procrastination myself, but I'll hopefully get down to writing the (much shorter) sequel in the next week or so.



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