Discussion: Lost In Darkness

Sephiroth

Topic says all. I don't know where I really got this idea from. It just popped into it one day. Like I said though, dark story. Oh, did anyone find that disturbing or a bit too much?

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Xander Vos

I found it a bit extreme for Star Wars, but the way its been going in recent years its bound to get to this stage in one shape or another, even if never as explicit, though I did enjoy it, your writing skills have improved immensley over the time I've known you, well done. (That wasn't meant to be patronising in the slightest, I mean it as a true compliment, though it does look a bit patronising.)
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Violet Song · Light Adept Joined: 04 May 2008 Posts: 12 Location: Naboo

Talen D'aar

I liked it. But the story isn't really what disturbed me. What disturbed me was the fact that you stole a few lines from FF7: Advent Children. I'm not trying to be an a-hole or anything but I'm never a supporter of "borrowing lines" whether you plan to be a published author or not.

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