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Cimil's Turning
 PostPosted: Tue Jan 29, 2008 3:29 am Reply with quote  
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  Cimil
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Location: Bugging the guy behind the counter at 7/11

The Jedi sprinted down the hall, his face beared a worried expression. 101, 102, 103, got it He stopped at a door that read 104 and knocked at it. Silently he pleaded that some one would answer. Minutes passed and no one answered. He knocked again, still no reply. He turned to the Key Pad and entered an all access code. The door slid open and the man burst inside, only to find it epmty.

"Cimil? Are you hear?" No answer. He checked the bathroom, bedroom, even the kitchen. Nothing. The man fell on the bed. Oh Cimil, I made a mistake, but you need to come back.

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 Cimil appraoched the cave entrance. The darkness seemed black comparred to the world around it. Cimil glanced around one last time, two children played in a feild near bye, as their father watched. A group of nerfs grazzed a few meters off. He turned back to the cave, and started walking ...

... The gravel crounched underfoot as he made his way through the cave. Roughly ten minutes had passed since he had entered. The scenery around him hadn't changed but, the darkness around him seemed..thicker and almost alive. The Dark prensence had grown stronger. But at the same time their seemed to be a countering force.

Cimil looked at the Data Pad in his hand. The screen had frozen, and the holocron had stopped working. Just then, Cimil noticed a blue light behing him.

There was a sizzle as the saber erupted into life.  Cimil entered a defensive stance. A Blue figure stood before him, now that Cimil looked more closely he saw that the firgure was wearing jedi robes.

" Your weapon will not be necceisary, I assure." The being said. Cimil hesitated before deactivation the blade.

"Who are you." The man gave a small grin.
"I was once a jedi knight like you, many years ago." The smile left his face.

"Once?" Cimil wasn't sure where the dark presence was coming from, best to be cautious.

"Well, I guess you could say I still am, in a way."



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 PostPosted: Sun Jun 15, 2008 6:07 pm Reply with quote  
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  Cimil
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Location: Bugging the guy behind the counter at 7/11

"Many hundred years ago, I was a young man, rather like you. I was headstrong, and ambitous. I came to this cave, wishing, dreaming of being the first to defeat the dark presence here." The smile faded away.

"So young, so foolish." The man looked vacantly off down the cave, then looked back at Cimil.

"You did come here hoping to beat the dark presence, didn't you?" Cimil hesitated, and then nodded. Then man shook his head.

"Please young one, don't make the same mistake I did. Hundreds of jedi have met there doom here. Leave now, and enjoy your youth. Your life."




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